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#1 Bane

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Posted 08 October 2010 - 10:52 PM

Hey guys,

I'm proud to present you a comic that I've made for a review on imperiumdersteine.de.
That comic is full with nonsense stuff and in-jokes - a little bit of Paris Hilton, Dr. Horrible, Apple & stuff- but see for yourself.

Here we go:


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If you want to see the original: Link

Thanks for watching.

Greetz
Bane

Edited by nine-eleven, 22 March 2011 - 04:24 PM.

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#2 Buckshot

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Posted 09 October 2010 - 12:04 AM

Ha!  "Is the rescue approaching in underpants"---best part!

#3 Bane

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Posted 15 October 2010 - 03:24 PM

I hope I have not given myself the trouble to translate that epic comic to gather only a single response.
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#4 Raygun

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Posted 15 October 2010 - 09:19 PM

View Postnine-eleven, on 15 October 2010 - 03:24 PM, said:

I hope I have not given myself the trouble to translate that epic comic to gather only a single response.


Yea, feedback is scarce over here :)

In short, I like the way you've created a story around an existing set, the presentation is slick, I like the way the panels "interact". Picture quality is top notch, with a good use of the camera's focus. However, I might have used some other fonts, some that would do more justice to the comic. Also, some word order /phrases were a bit off, but it's ok for a translation anyhow. Overall, the script was funny, is an over-the-top kind of way, sort of like my comic :P I didn't expect the running gag (when the girl goes up the stairs, what was a surprise. And about the "walkie-talky battery plot hole".. you gave yourself away :p I wouldn't have noticed :) More so, I thought that Bane was with the Federal forces!

Feel free to comment about my comic, here: http://www.eurobrick...showtopic=46986

This being said, well, make some more :)

#5 JimBee

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Posted 17 October 2010 - 03:28 AM

Well, it made absolutely no sense, but I liked it. It was an interesting story idea, and I think it was put together quite well. The effects and editing were great, and the panels were easy to read.

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#6 The Yellow Brick

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Posted 17 October 2010 - 11:51 AM

I found this very funny, Great pictures and a Great story line Posted Image I can't wait to see another.



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