nine-eleven, on 15 October 2010 - 03:24 PM, said:
I hope I have not given myself the trouble to translate that epic comic to gather only a single response.
Yea, feedback is scarce over here :)
In short, I like the way you've created a story around an existing set, the presentation is slick, I like the way the panels "interact". Picture quality is top notch, with a good use of the camera's focus. However, I might have used some other fonts, some that would do more justice to the comic. Also, some word order /phrases were a bit off, but it's ok for a translation anyhow. Overall, the script was funny, is an over-the-top kind of way, sort of like my comic :P I didn't expect the running gag (when the girl goes up the stairs, what was a surprise. And about the "walkie-talky battery plot hole".. you gave yourself away :p I wouldn't have noticed :) More so, I thought that Bane was with the Federal forces!
Feel free to comment about my comic, here: http://www.eurobrick...showtopic=46986
This being said, well, make some more :)