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[Moc] Clone Wars: Battle For Naboo


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#1 Masked Builder

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Posted 08 October 2010 - 02:22 AM

So I thought to kick off my stay here as a knight I'd post a Moc.  While this is definetly not one of my better ones I still kind of like it.  How ya'll like it!  (please excuse my southern slang :classic: )

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#2 CommanderFox

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Posted 08 October 2010 - 03:02 AM

Hmm more of an action diorama, than a MOC. :sceptic:
I think maybe you should add some bricks onto the green base, looks alittle to plain.
Maybe add some streets and some sand green-sand colored buildings to give it more of a Naboo spin. :wink:

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Edited by CommanderFox, 08 October 2010 - 03:03 AM.

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#3 Brickdoctor

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Posted 08 October 2010 - 03:13 AM

Yeah. With all due respect, I don't really see the 'MOC' portion of this build. It's more of a baseplat with minifig posed on it type build. Congrats on reaching the Knight rank, though.

What I'd like to see would be, as Commander fox said, dome of the distinctive tan and green Naboo buildings, and a custom Gian or Flash speeder would make it exceptional.

#4 lightningtiger

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Posted 08 October 2010 - 03:19 AM

Now, I say boy.....I say.....nice try, but you got it all wrong......a MOC needs more to it than that !
Sorry, 'Masked Builder' I was suddenly over come with feeling like Posted Image from the deep south.
Nice try, as he....er I said, but a bit more scenery would justify calling it a MOC.
Anyway, keep on bricking ! :sweet:

#5 Masked Builder

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Posted 08 October 2010 - 01:54 PM

Thanks all.  I'll see what I can do about detail.




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