Jump to content


TOR II Entry, Round 2


  • Please log in to reply
14 replies to this topic  – Started by Oky , Aug 07 2010 07:48 AM

#1 Oky

Oky
  • I am O-ky, English-German relations


    Posts: 9518
    Joined: 02-October 07
    Member: 2028
    Country: USA

Posted 07 August 2010 - 07:48 AM

I appologize for posting this a bit late. I was a bit confused about the deadline. I hope this can still be accepted.

The Blue Avenger Strikes Back!


The Blue Avenger's life long quest for the heartless redcoat who once murdered his parents has finally come to an end! A good friend of the Avenger, a bluecoat spy who disguises himself as a barrel in order to overhear redcoat conversations, has found out that whoever was responsible for this tragedy was residing in the fort below them.

Posted Image


Of course, the fort was heavily guarded by redcoat soldiers, but the Blue Avenger cut through their lines with ease - literally!

Posted Image


After he entered the entrance hall, a horrific beast obstructed his path. It was a ZCerberus monster, a redcoat whose greed for Bananas had terribly deformed him.

Posted Image


But not even he was a match for our hero! The Avenger whipped out one of his Blue-merangs and threw it at the beast. The monster was knocked out immediately, and our Avenger was free to proceed.

Posted Image


The next room offered a bit more of a challenge. The door was guarded by a giant Skalldyr Crab!

Posted Image


Using his razor-sharp wit, the Blue Avenger devised a plan. Before the crab could attack him, he quickly cut the chains which were holding the chandelier above the crab's head, and it fell on top of it. Immediately, the crustacean started to burn. It turns out the foul stench that emanates from redcoats is a flammable gas.

Posted Image


Finally, he entered the final room. There, sitting at a desk was the person he had been looking for for so many years...

Posted Image


Avenger: "Commodore Hornbricker! It was you! I should have known; that beard is a dead give-away!"
Hornbricker: "Yes, t'was I who took your parents' worthless lives! And I enjoyed it thoroughly! I hoped you would never find out, but it seems I underestimated your abilities."
Avenger: "You monster!"

Both of them drew their cutlasses and began to fight.

Posted Image


They fought long and hard, but in the end, the commodore made a dirty move and kicked the avenger in the crotch, causing him to loose his weapon. Hornbricker said: "It's over, Blue Avenger! Any last words?" "Yes," said a voice from behind him, "Croissant!" "What?" replied the commodore confused and turned around. In that moment, a stale croissant hit him right in the face. It was the Avenger's trusty sidekick, Admiral Croissant, the Blue Wonder!

Posted Image


Once the commodore regained consciousness, he found himself stuffed into a large cannon.

Posted Image


The Avenger lit the fuse and said: "This will teach you never to mess with bluecoats ever again, commodore!" And with a big BOOM, the cannon sent Commodore Hornbricker halfway across the ocean, who said "Curse you, Blue Avenger! You haven't seen the last of meeeeeeeeeee!" Once his voice couldn't be heard anymore, Admiral Croissant said: "And stay out!"

The End.


I hope you liked it. The reason why I chose Commodore Hornbricker as the main villain was simply to make a homage and thank him for this great contest. :pir-classic:

Blue Avenger, Away! :pir-devil:

Edited by Oky Wan Kenobi, 07 August 2010 - 06:42 PM.


#2 Fugazi

Fugazi

    Posts: 4128
    Joined: 08-January 10
    Member: 8966
    Country: Canada

Posted 07 August 2010 - 09:22 AM

Ahah! Great comic Oky, I'm glad the Blue Avenger could make it in the end! I love the Blue-merang and the giant Skalldyr crab, well done! :thumbup:
New Member? Read This | Questions? Need Help? Ask Here
Site Guidelines | Eurobricks FAQ | Visual User Guide

#3 Skalldyr

Skalldyr
  • Don't worry, be a Redcoat!


    Posts: 1206
    Joined: 16-March 10
    Member: 9943
    Country: Germany

Posted 07 August 2010 - 10:46 AM

Ohh yes, I'm really happy to read your last comic. And it exceeded all my expectations. The BIG Skalldyr Posted Image is absolutely hilarious with its perfectly builded hat.  :pir_laugh2:

Edited by Skalldyr, 07 August 2010 - 10:47 AM.

Flickr / Brickshelf / Mocpages

Posted Image  Don't Worry, Be Crabby! Posted Image

#4 Captain Becker

Captain Becker
  • Once a red coat, not always a red coat.


    Posts: 1644
    Joined: 30-December 09
    Member: 8823
    Country: Finland

Posted 07 August 2010 - 01:52 PM

Excellent comic Oky wan, i really liked the giant Skalldyr part, but the last pic :pir-cry_sad:  why did you have to use him as a cannon ball? :pir_bawling:  Anyway, great comic. Too bad at i already voted so i cant vote again, you would have getted my vote.

Captain Becker
Posted Image Posted Image <---- Thank you so much joey!
Thank you Jebediahs

Currently playing as: Captain Charles J. Becker, Oleon in BOBS
Posted Image

#5 Oky

Oky
  • I am O-ky, English-German relations


    Posts: 9518
    Joined: 02-October 07
    Member: 2028
    Country: USA

Posted 07 August 2010 - 06:38 PM

Thanks guys. I too am glad I could still make it. :pir-sweet:

View PostCaptain Becker, on 07 August 2010 - 01:52 PM, said:

Too bad at i already voted so i cant vote again, you would have getted my vote.
I'm pretty sure you can change your vote until the voting closes. :pir-wink:

#6 Lord Arjay

Lord Arjay
  • Sneaky Ninja Assasin. With a Machete.


    Posts: 1100
    Joined: 07-April 10
    Member: 10183
    Country: U.K.

Posted 07 August 2010 - 06:51 PM

Very entertaining. I loved the blue-merang. :pir_laugh2:  The way you delt with the Commodore was a fitting end. At least we now know what was under that hat: Nothing!
Good Luck with the contest!  :thumbup:

Posted Image Posted Image Posted Image Posted Image Posted Image Posted Image


I was Jolie Jadis, winner in Sandy’s Hogwarts Mafia-Neutral

I was Mr Ari Jay, convicted day thirteen in Zepher's Eurodina Mafia-Scum

I was Timtam Timmers, winner in Def's Dr. Bloodbrick's Asylum Mafia -Scum
I was Arianna Jacques, winner in Jim's Werewolf Mafia -Town
I am Captain Pete Garrison in Bob's Red Scare Mystery
I was Kaley Cat, convicted day ten in Hinckley's The Forest Mafia -Scum


#7 General Redwater

General Redwater
  • Captain Blue Hair urgently needs to change pants!


    Posts: 672
    Joined: 07-March 10
    Member: 9843

Posted 08 August 2010 - 12:32 AM

A huge Skalldyr! :pir-oh:   He must of had a growth spurt while I was gone!  Great entry!  I think that you killed a Bluecoat, it looks like one of the heads of the Redcoats that you killed has C. Blue Hair's head.  Poor him! :pir-laugh:
Great entry! :thumbup:
-
General Redwater
Thank you Joey Lock for my smilies.Posted ImagePosted ImagePosted ImagePosted Image
Thanks Jebediahs!
Join The Brick Hope!

"We shall defend our island whatever the cost may be; we shall fight on beaches, landing grounds, in fields, in streets and on the hills. We shall never surrender and even if, which I do not for the moment believe, this island or a large part of it were subjugated and starving, then our empire beyond the seas, armed and guarded by the British Fleet, will carry on the struggle until in God's good time the New World with all its power and might, sets forth to the liberation and rescue of the Old."
- Prime Minister Winston Churchill (after the fall of France)


#8 hawkrider

hawkrider

    Posts: 160
    Joined: 24-February 10
    Member: 9692
    Country: texas

Posted 08 August 2010 - 01:27 AM

Since water is known to be blue the redcoats never learned how to swim and the commodore drowned  :pir_laugh2: .Nice entry loved the giant Skalldyr crab!
In the begging there was only 3 men one liked the color red ,another liked the color blue,and the last one liked the color green.Then they found some coats and started hitting each other.That's how war was made.
I will only have respect for redcoats when they actually make a "General Redwater's amazing bleach!"

#9 Oky

Oky
  • I am O-ky, English-German relations


    Posts: 9518
    Joined: 02-October 07
    Member: 2028
    Country: USA

Posted 08 August 2010 - 11:35 PM

Thanks again for the kind comments!

View PostGeneral Redwater, on 08 August 2010 - 12:32 AM, said:

A huge Skalldyr! :pir-oh:   He must of had a growth spurt while I was gone!  Great entry!  I think that you killed a Bluecoat, it looks like one of the heads of the Redcoats that you killed has C. Blue Hair's head.  Poor him! :pir-laugh:
Nah, he simply mutated as a result of the illness known as "Redcoat allegiance". :pir-tongue:
And of course that dead redcoat isn't our blue-haired captain! It's just a copycat who stole his facial hair style. :pir_laugh2:

View Posthawkrider, on 08 August 2010 - 01:27 AM, said:

Since water is known to be blue the redcoats never learned how to swim and the commodore drowned. :pir_laugh2:
Haha! I didn't even think about that! :pir_laugh2:  Is it too late to add that to my story?

#10 Commodore Hornbricker

Commodore Hornbricker
  • Cyborg Chef Splatter


    Posts: 2181
    Joined: 30-January 09
    Member: 5169
    Country: USA

Posted 09 August 2010 - 06:20 PM

Ha! Great comic.  I can't believe I didn't smell Croissant coming.  I am glad I still have all those cloned Commodore's.  The true story is that I killed your parents for revenge for it was they who many years ago killed my parents who many many years ago killed your parents parents who many many many years ago had killed my parents parents parents....oh it goes on like this for a very long time.  That is why by crushing the Blue Avengers testicles I have finally ended the cycle of parentcide!

Sorry I couldn't get your entry posted over the weekend.  My internet connection was down at the house.  I was about to do it this morning when I got to the office but saw that Erdy had done it already.  Thanks
Posted Image Sail on over to the Port of Brick Royal
"I am not having him flogged for fighting, Mr. Gerard." - Horatio Hornblower

#11 Big Cam

Big Cam
  • A good mood, too.


    Posts: 14003
    Joined: 02-April 09
    Member: 5701
    Country: USA

Posted 11 August 2010 - 10:32 PM

I love your character Oky, you make some great special effects too.


Go to Classic-Pirates.com


It may have been late, but it made the blog!

#12 General Armendariz

General Armendariz
  • I invoke upon thee...the Curse of the Merman-General!


    Posts: 1870
    Joined: 03-October 08
    Member: 4056
    Country: United States

Posted 11 August 2010 - 10:50 PM

And the bluecoats once again kick A**! Great comic, is the crab your design? Its very well made and smooth.
Thanks for including me in your comic :pir-classic: Silly redcoats can't tell when im spying on them. Im a master of disguise!

#13 Admiral Croissant

Admiral Croissant
  • Popped his title cherry!


    Posts: 3029
    Joined: 03-December 08
    Member: 4578
    Country: Netherlands

Posted 12 August 2010 - 04:21 PM

Haha, looks like my concrete croissant did a good job again :pir_laugh2:
Nice entry, I liked the giant Skalldyr and Hornbricker's head sticking out of the cannon :pir-classic:
Got questions? Need help? New member?                            
Read the site guidelines
Index of helpful tutorials

Posted Image
20 gun Frigate 'Vesta'
My Brickshelf
My Flickr
My Mocpages


#14 Oky

Oky
  • I am O-ky, English-German relations


    Posts: 9518
    Joined: 02-October 07
    Member: 2028
    Country: USA

Posted 14 August 2010 - 10:11 PM

Hehe, thanks. I'm glad the ones involved in the comic liked it. :pir-classic:

View PostCommodore Hornbricker, on 09 August 2010 - 06:20 PM, said:

The true story is that I killed your parents for revenge for it was they who many years ago killed my parents who many many years ago killed your parents parents who many many many years ago had killed my parents parents parents....oh it goes on like this for a very long time.  That is why by crushing the Blue Avengers testicles I have finally ended the cycle of parentcide!
But we all know it was your family who started it. :pir-tongue: Oh, and don't worry about my balls; the smart and skilled bluecoat surgeons were able to restore them to their old health! Or should I say do worry? :pir-devil:
:pir_laugh2:

View PostCommodore Hornbricker, on 09 August 2010 - 06:20 PM, said:

Sorry I couldn't get your entry posted over the weekend.  My internet connection was down at the house.  I was about to do it this morning when I got to the office but saw that Erdy had done it already.  Thanks
That's OK. Serves me right for being so tardy. :pir-sad2:

View PostBig Cam, on 11 August 2010 - 10:32 PM, said:

It may have been late, but it made the blog!
Thanks, Big Cam! :pir-sweet: Once again, I'm honored.

View PostGeneral Armendariz, on 11 August 2010 - 10:50 PM, said:

Great comic, is the crab your design? Its very well made and smooth.
It was inspired by the one from 4101 Wild Collection, but mostly it's my own design.

#15 Batbrick

Batbrick
  • I'm back ...with a banana


    Posts: 5675
    Joined: 27-August 07
    Member: 1917
    Country: Australia

Posted 15 August 2010 - 10:22 AM

Another enjoyable creation Oky. While not as good as the first, I like the new direction of this one, especially with the big crab, which is awesome. I had to laugh at the crotch bit too, it was just so random! And of ocurse the delightful finish of the absurdly sized cannon is great, props again and may bluecoats forever triumph!

Batbrick Away!  :pir-devil:
And see and comment on KDog's hilarious Space Comic here:
Posted Image
Click on pic to see and comment now!  And please add this ad to your sig so more people can see this fantastic work!

Batbrick Away!




0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users

Sponsored Links