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#1 Mrlegoninja

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Posted 19 July 2010 - 04:04 AM

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This is my moc: It is supposed to be a passenger car for my recently bought cargo train( I don't want to buy the whole other passenger train :thumbdown: .
It seats five passengers, has a door, and has a place to put the luggage.
Comments are welcome :classic: !

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#2 Odyssey

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Posted 22 July 2010 - 07:12 PM

It kind of reminds me of a car of the London Underground with the low roof. It looks a bit blocky though, you may want to try out those parts for the roof for example: Posted Image or Posted Image.

Also, you may want to add an undercarriage and add some more details to the outside. Just take a look at online photos of a train/trains you have in mind and try to replicate some of the details you see.
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#3 Mrlegoninja

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Posted 22 July 2010 - 09:11 PM

View PostOdyssey, on 22 July 2010 - 07:12 PM, said:

It kind of reminds me of a car of the London Underground with the low roof. It looks a bit blocky though, you may want to try out those parts for the roof for example: Posted Image or Posted Image.

Also, you may want to add an undercarriage and add some more details to the outside. Just take a look at online photos of a train/trains you have in mind and try to replicate some of the details you see.
I know its not that great, but I did a quick job with it.
I will consider changing it.

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#4 Sir E Fullner

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Posted 22 July 2010 - 10:19 PM

Very good. Looks like of a mix between a salt wagon and a passenger car. :sceptic:

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