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#1 Zepher

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Posted 30 June 2010 - 03:27 AM

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Editor's Note:  Mostly happy with this episode.  Not 100%, there were some things I tried and didn't like, and a lot of things I tried and DID like.  I won't tell which is which, since generally if i do so the "critics" just repeat that back to me.  So, tell me what YOU thought was good and what YOU thought was bad.

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#2 Bob

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Posted 30 June 2010 - 11:57 AM

I've been following these stories, and I must say, these are very nicely done.

Somehow, I picked up in the last story that Green intended on shooting the scientist's after they dug too deep. Excellent story, though. Your photography has improved, too, which is always a good thing.

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#3 Eskallon

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Posted 01 July 2010 - 05:19 PM

I loved the suspense built up in this chapter of the story. However I disliked the blob of brightness in the second to last photo.

#4 hawkrider

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Posted 02 July 2010 - 05:27 PM

This is serious business not what I usually see nice comic only problem wrong is the lighting other then that it's great.
In the begging there was only 3 men one liked the color red ,another liked the color blue,and the last one liked the color green.Then they found some coats and started hitting each other.That's how war was made.
I will only have respect for redcoats when they actually make a "General Redwater's amazing bleach!"

#5 Asterios

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Posted 02 July 2010 - 05:37 PM

Well I liked the things that you liked and didn't like the things you didn't like, eagerly awaits the next issue. :classic:

#6 Zepher

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Posted 03 July 2010 - 07:54 PM

Thanks for the comments y'all!  Next comic may be up next weekend, or some time this week, depending on how motivated I am and how quickly I can get a set done.

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