Making The Whole World Blind
Posted 30 June 2010 - 03:27 AM
Editor's Note: Mostly happy with this episode. Not 100%, there were some things I tried and didn't like, and a lot of things I tried and DID like. I won't tell which is which, since generally if i do so the "critics" just repeat that back to me. So, tell me what YOU thought was good and what YOU thought was bad.
Lil' Zepher In Mafia School
Posted 30 June 2010 - 11:57 AM
Somehow, I picked up in the last story that Green intended on shooting the scientist's after they dug too deep. Excellent story, though. Your photography has improved, too, which is always a good thing.
I am Baulf in TinyPiesRUs' Ragnarok Now Redux!
Posted 02 July 2010 - 05:27 PM
I will only have respect for redcoats when they actually make a "General Redwater's amazing bleach!"
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