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#1 Zepher

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Posted 28 May 2010 - 05:49 PM

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Editors Notes:  This was a fun comic to do.  I experimented with the power of images, and composition.  I tried to make Green seem more powerful in a number of way.  Whenever there was a shot of him, he was always taken from a lower angle looking up, and whenever there was a shot of the other two, the shot was from a higher angle looking down on them.  On top of that, I illuminated Green must of the time, where the other two are stuck in darkness!  Tell me if it worked!

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Edited by Zepher, 28 May 2010 - 06:08 PM.

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#2 Lord Arjay

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Posted 28 May 2010 - 09:03 PM

The plot thickens. Another good addition to your series! :thumbup:

View PostZepher, on May 28 2010, 06:49 PM, said:

[Editors Notes:  This was a fun comic to do.  I experimented with the power of images, and composition.  I tried to make Green seem more powerful in a number of way.  Whenever there was a shot of him, he was always taken from a lower angle looking up, and whenever there was a shot of the other two, the shot was from a higher angle looking down on them.  On top of that, I illuminated Green must of the time, where the other two are stuck in darkness!  Tell me if it worked!

Yes it did work, I liked the way you illuminated him. Some little constructive criticism, the font you use for Mr Green is a bit hard to read. Other than that I have nothing to add.
Well Done!

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#3 Admiral Croissant

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Posted 28 May 2010 - 10:43 PM

I only found the text of Green a bit hard to read.
But there isn't a lot of action in it and still it's interesting to read.
Great job on that :thumbup:
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#4 CallMePie

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Posted 29 May 2010 - 01:18 AM

I like how each character has a style of font to reflect their personality. GREAT comic.  :thumbup:    :thumbup:
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#5 Captain Genaro

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Posted 30 May 2010 - 05:44 PM

I lithe way that you used the different font for Mr. Green. It was a little hard to read but seemed to give him a voice of his own. Also, I thought that the effects you used were great. Can't wait to see the next one.

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#6 Jlblue

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Posted 31 May 2010 - 03:30 AM

Wow. This is so ridiculously awesome.

And beyond just being awesome, it's got substance to it. Everything about it really clicks. The narration, the quotes, the photography, it all complements the intrigue of the story. I've read three parts and already I really, really, want to know what happens.

So good job.

#7 Zepher

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Posted 31 May 2010 - 05:23 AM

View PostJlblue, on May 31 2010, 04:30 AM, said:

Wow. This is so ridiculously awesome.

And beyond just being awesome, it's got substance to it. Everything about it really clicks. The narration, the quotes, the photography, it all complements the intrigue of the story. I've read three parts and already I really, really, want to know what happens.

So good job.

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#8 Jlblue

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Posted 01 June 2010 - 11:36 AM

The only thing I would consider changing is the font size on the speech bubbles to something just a bit bigger. Other than that, all three parts are really good.



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