Conflict At Africa: Chapter 1
Posted 20 May 2010 - 01:28 AM
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"We shall defend our island whatever the cost may be; we shall fight on beaches, landing grounds, in fields, in streets and on the hills. We shall never surrender and even if, which I do not for the moment believe, this island or a large part of it were subjugated and starving, then our empire beyond the seas, armed and guarded by the British Fleet, will carry on the struggle until in God's good time the New World with all its power and might, sets forth to the liberation and rescue of the Old."
- Prime Minister Winston Churchill (after the fall of France)
Posted 24 May 2010 - 08:57 PM
One suggestion would be to add sound effects, like when things go...err boom (need better word here). You know like in comics.
The humour you add is quite good.
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Posted 01 June 2010 - 02:44 AM
This one was a bit of a prelim- I put in a few new stuff that I haven't done in the previous entrys- namely the sound effects, whizzing bullets and Glendon's holsters- I'd really like to know what you think of them, and if I should continue with them. Chapter 2 coming soon...
Edited by The Legonater, 02 June 2010 - 05:12 PM.
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Posted 14 June 2010 - 09:18 AM
Edited by hawkrider, 14 June 2010 - 09:20 AM.
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