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Conflict At Africa: Chapter 1


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#1 The Legonater

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Posted 19 May 2010 - 11:31 PM

Here's the first chapter...

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*Cue Dramatic music*

Commenst are more than welcome.

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#2 General Redwater

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Posted 20 May 2010 - 01:28 AM

Nice comic!  :classic:  I really like the movie reference. :laugh:
Great job. :thumbup:
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#3 The Legonater

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Posted 24 May 2010 - 08:30 PM

Here's Part 2 to Chapter 1...

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Aren't Sergents the best confidence builders :tongue: ?

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#4 Lord Arjay

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Posted 24 May 2010 - 08:57 PM

Looks good so far. :thumbup:
One suggestion would be to add sound effects, like when things go...err boom (need better word here). You know like in comics. :classic:
The humour you add is quite good.
Well done! :sweet:

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#5 The Legonater

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Posted 01 June 2010 - 02:44 AM

Here's the final part of the first chapter.

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This one was a bit of a prelim- I put in a few new stuff that I haven't done in the previous entrys- namely the sound effects, whizzing bullets and Glendon's holsters- I'd really like to know what you think of them, and if I should continue with them. Chapter 2 coming soon...

Edited by The Legonater, 02 June 2010 - 05:12 PM.

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#6 The Legonater

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Posted 08 June 2010 - 11:22 PM

Seriously- any feedback would be nice.

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#7 hawkrider

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Posted 14 June 2010 - 09:18 AM

Wow you send out more comics then I could count which for good for me I always enjoy good comics is this is one of the best so far.

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