Posted 02 April 2010 - 04:27 PM
Thank you Jebediahs
Currently playing as: Captain Charles J. Becker, Oleon in BOBS
Posted 02 April 2010 - 06:40 PM
A few suggestions if I may- for the rocks- I would maybe try to blend some dark bluish gray into the light bluish gray on the rocks for a cool effect.
I would also be tempted to add another color into the white fortress to break it up a bit. I am guilty of using too much white myself from time to time. I find that both tan and light bluish grey work really well to break-up the "whiteness" and still keep the build looking cohesive.
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Posted 02 April 2010 - 07:50 PM
I especially like the window, how you created that little angle by using the inverted slop brick. Really simple but clever technique, and the flowers make it look really nice, too!
Posted 02 April 2010 - 08:08 PM
"I am not having him flogged for fighting, Mr. Gerard." - Horatio Hornblower
Posted 02 April 2010 - 09:43 PM
Overall its a great first time cliff-fort combination, good job
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Posted 03 April 2010 - 05:09 AM
I will only have respect for redcoats when they actually make a "General Redwater's amazing bleach!"
Posted 04 April 2010 - 01:25 AM
I think I should add some different color to my fort's wall to get real old wall effect and try to add cannons to be a real fort.
Maybe I can do some changes in the days to come .
Thanks a lot.
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