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#1 Dark Ranger

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Posted 20 March 2010 - 03:15 AM

So I made this comic a while ago. Excuse the badness of this first part. Do note that I haven't finished it yet, and it has been dead for a while. I'm thinking of rebooting it, when I have the time.
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Ignore how it says Darkkranger5 (supposed to be one k) and Andrew_t29. I'm Darkranger5 and my brother is Andrew_t29. It was our usernames on another forum. Oh and BTW. Derins is my sigfig if you haven't noticed.

#2 Dutch

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Posted 20 March 2010 - 03:26 AM

This should be have been posted in "Brick Flicks & Comics"

Any way's the set needs to be improved upon as well as the custom figures.

#3 Dark Ranger

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Posted 20 March 2010 - 03:32 AM

View Postclone killer, on Mar 19 2010, 08:26 PM, said:

This should be have been posted in "Brick Flicks & Comics"

Any way's the set needs to be improved upon as well as the custom figures.
Oh. Oops. So sorry. It is just that the Lego Space comic is in the Sci-Fi board...

#4 saberwing

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Posted 20 March 2010 - 10:12 AM

looks pretty good.
I have one useful tip for you : You shouldn't put the speech balloons inside the mouth of the character, but just a bit next to it.
Because now the balloon is on top of the characters face, which looks pretty sloppy.

"Hard work never killed anyone, but why take a chance?"
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#5 Dark Ranger

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Posted 20 March 2010 - 06:48 PM

Thanks guys. And thanks to whoever moved this. Here's more. Please guys. comment.
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Yes, I see all those errors too...

Edited by Dark Ranger, 20 March 2010 - 06:57 PM.


#6 awesomebrick

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Posted 20 March 2010 - 07:01 PM

That's a pretty good comic dark ranger :thumbup:
The only problem is I don't really like the costum clone's I could never do that to my tiny army :tongue:

Edited by awesomebrick, 20 March 2010 - 07:02 PM.

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#7 Jlblue

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Posted 27 March 2010 - 06:24 PM

Well, well, well, what have we here?   :tongue:

I get the strange feeling I've commented on this before, Dark Ranger. Still a pretty solid action comic from where I'm standing, so... Good job.

#8 Dark Ranger

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Posted 27 March 2010 - 06:33 PM

View PostJlblue, on Mar 27 2010, 11:24 AM, said:

Well, well, well, what have we here?   :tongue:

I get the strange feeling I've commented on this before, Dark Ranger. Still a pretty solid action comic from where I'm standing, so... Good job.
:oh: You're here! Wow you're the last person I thought I would see here.

I'll upload some more later.



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