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[God Iron]

Ok guys here it is finally!
It's looking like the story for HERO Factory is going to be a bit... sh*t so we'll make our own story right?

My first proposal is that we change the name to HERO.
Also I was thinking each member could get their own character to do pretty much what they want with it so list:

Preston Stormer - Darkness Falls
William Blaze - Shaddowcroc
Natalie Breez - ???
Jimi Stringer - God Iron
Duncan Bulk - ???
Mark Surge - Toatali

Xplode - Bfahome
Corroder - BioHero
Thunder - Mesonak
Meltdown - Disturbia
Von Nebula - ???
Rotor - Steel Dragon


If anyone has any suggestions, wants dibs, begin the story or has a suggestions just post away. Also if any senior members want to take over the show, go for it. If you don't like anything about the story, just say. We will just have to reach a comprimise. This is our story after all.

I'll begin
On a dark planet hanging on the edge of a black hole, ancient ruins of a once great empire chock in pollution of a toxic wasteland. Savage creatures roam the wastes under watch by shadowy figures. In the middle of a past metropolis in a colossal factory something has switched on. HERO Factory is online.

Edited by God Iron, 18 January 2010 - 03:05 PM.

[Bfahome]

God Iron, on Jan 11 2010, 05:57 PM, said:

It's looking like the story for HERO Factory is going to be a bit... sh*t so we'll make our own story right?

We've only had a little non-english blurb about it.  Not much to go by.  Imagine if the summary of BIONICLE 2001 was "Six robotic heroes must collect powerful faces as they travel on an epic quest to rid their island of dangerous animals."

God Iron, on Jan 11 2010, 05:57 PM, said:

Jimi Stringer - Pencoin
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Dibs on Jimi Stringer of course.

Eh?  It looks like Pencoin already called it.  Oh wait he got banned, disregard that. :)

But whatever, dibsing XPlode.

Edited by Bfahome, 12 January 2010 - 01:21 AM.

[ShaddowCroc]

Hahah, cool. I was gonna make a topic, but I got too afraid that I'd be shooed out . . .

Anyway, that's an interesting story idea, but the black hole part seems a bit .  .  . implausible. But that's just my opinion.

(And I was thinking maybe we should try to connect this to BIONICLE a bit, but again, that's just my idea . . . )

If no one minds, I'd like to call dibs on William Blaze/Furno . . .

[Steel Dragon]

Dibs on Rotor! Can I take a turn?

[Darkness Falls]

Dibs on Preston Stormer.

Is this just a made up version of a new story?

[The Dor]

I think this could work out. I think Duncan Bulk looks like he could be interesting, so I guess I'll call dibs on him :)

[Disturbia]

I'll call dibs on Meltdown, thanks.  

[BioHero]

Sounds sweet. Dibs on Corroder. :)

BIOHERO

[~Wrack'n'Ruin~]

But your idea is terrible. =(

[The Alchemyst]

~Wrack'n'Ruin~, on Jan 12 2010, 05:26 PM, said:

But your idea is terrible. =(

Totally sounds like Captain Planet.
What's with the ruins and black hole though?

[ultra hamster]

dibs on von nebula. i guess i think everyone else good is taken

Edited by ultra hamster, 13 January 2010 - 03:30 AM.

[CabooseBM]

~Wrack'n'Ruin~, on Jan 12 2010, 06:26 PM, said:

But your idea is terrible. =(

It's got potential, I think.

[ultra hamster]

no humans in this story right?

Edited by ultra hamster, 13 January 2010 - 03:34 AM.

[Cap'n Kopaka]

ultra hamster, on Jan 12 2010, 09:33 PM, said:

no humans in this story right?

I don't think there are humans in herO Factory either, they just look like time-traveling robot superheroes. Plus, I don't see what's wrong with humans. We -do- live on a planet inhabited by them right? So unless you're a misanthropist you really can't complain about the fact that a Lego line has characters with humans in it :<
~ck

[ultra hamster]

Cap'n Kopaka, on Jan 14 2010, 10:38 PM, said:

I don't think there are humans in herO Factory either, they just look like time-traveling robot superheroes. Plus, I don't see what's wrong with humans. We -do- live on a planet inhabited by them right? So unless you're a misanthropist you really can't complain about the fact that a Lego line has characters with humans in it :<
~ck

I'm not complaining about humans in hero factory I'm just asking if they are any in here since the story takes place  in the darkest reaches of space near a black hole. this story is supposed to be different than hero factory right, otherwise there no point to making our own.

[Biotoakid]

http://www.majhost.c...-motivation.gif

Edit by WhiteFang: Link remains for now, deeplinked remove. It's not LEGO picture, but some sort of crap. Click if you want to waste your bandwidth.

Edited by WhiteFang, 15 January 2010 - 04:59 AM.
Removed rubbish..

[The Dor]

Actually I think I'm out. Duncan Bulk is back up for grabs or whatever.

[---Vertea---]

I call corroder.... oh, yes... suits me well, I think

[BioHero]

---Vertea---, on Jan 15 2010, 03:39 PM, said:

I call corroder.... oh, yes... suits me well, I think

Sorry dude, I already called Corroder.


BIOHERO

[toatali]

dibs on Mark Surge, but, when do we start, when everyone has been dibed??

[Steel Dragon]

toatali, on Jan 15 2010, 05:31 PM, said:

dibs on Mark Surge, but, when do we start, when everyone has been dibed??

I think that makes sense.

Someone should make a new topic for the actual story, once all the spots are full.

[BioHero]

I decided to update the list, since God Iron hasn't:

Preston Stormer – Darkness Falls
William Blaze - ShaddowCroc
Natalie Breez - ???
Jimi Stringer – God Iron
Duncan Bulk – ???
Mark Surge - toatali

Xplode - Bfahome
Corroder – BioHero
Thunder - ???
Meltdown - Disturbia
Von Nebula – ultra hamster
Rotor – Steel Dragon

BIOHERO

[Zip]

An RPG, guys, really?

Eh, do whatever you want.

Edited by Zip, 15 January 2010 - 10:20 PM.

[The Alchemyst]

I like how there's been not much added or idea of what's going to happen.

[Steel Dragon]

The Alchemyst, on Jan 15 2010, 08:58 PM, said:

I like how there's been not much added or idea of what's going to happen.

Sarcasm? Or I'm just terrible at gauging tone over the interwebs.

Is God Iron still on board with this? Because I've run stuff like this on other sites before, so I could take over.