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6 replies to this topic  – Started by Dr. Steve , Nov 30 2009 10:29 PM

#1 Dr. Steve

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Posted 30 November 2009 - 10:29 PM

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My 3 Entry's for the PTV II tell a story.

The 1st (small entry) Captain Brick Beard falls in Love with the Governors Daughter and the War Ends

The 2nd (medium entry) The Wedding
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The 3rd (large division) The Honeymoon

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Captain Brick Beard has fallen in Love with the Governors Daughter and has asked for her hand in marriage.
They Agree and the war has ended.



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Thanks to Theotters and Badboy for your suggestions and the kick in the pants to finish this

Edited by SlyOwl, 02 December 2009 - 09:53 PM.


#2 badboytje88

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Posted 30 November 2009 - 10:43 PM

I find this MOC a little bit boring. The medium MOC was very nice, this one is just a tiled baseplate with three minifigs on it. Maybe you could pose brickbeard as if he was kneeling to ask the governors daughter to marry him. You could put a trans clear gem in his hand to represent the ring.

#3 Dr. Steve

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Posted 30 November 2009 - 10:46 PM

View Postbadboytje88, on Nov 30 2009, 05:43 PM, said:

I find this MOC a little bit boring. The medium MOC was very nice, this one is just a tiled baseplate with three minifigs on it. Maybe you could pose brickbeard as if he was kneeling to ask the governors daughter to marry him. You could put a trans clear gem in his hand to represent the ring.

Thats a greta Idea (he only has one knee...LOL)   Just ran out of time.

#4 MetroiD

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Posted 30 November 2009 - 10:51 PM

I guess this works fine as an intro /first part to your story, but I still think you could have added some scenery to the MOC - it could have been situated in a room or hall of sorts... and then it would have been a perfectly fine Small division entry - after all, why enter it if it won't be subject to voting?
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#5 Dr. Steve

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Posted 30 November 2009 - 11:08 PM

View PostTheOtters, on Nov 30 2009, 05:51 PM, said:

I guess this works fine as an intro /first part to your story, but I still think you could have added some scenery to the MOC - it could have been situated in a room or hall of sorts... and then it would have been a perfectly fine Small division entry - after all, why enter it if it won't be subject to voting?

Just to set the story (i thought I would have time to make it and I did not) :pir_bawling:

Looks like a have a few parts here at my office.....I will post a new pic ASAP

NEW PIC IS UP. Thanks for the Help

Edited by Dr. Steve, 01 December 2009 - 12:08 AM.


#6 MetroiD

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Posted 01 December 2009 - 01:43 AM

View PostDr. Steve, on Dec 1 2009, 12:08 AM, said:

NEW PIC IS UP. Thanks for the Help
Bart's piece of advice really proved useful here.  :thumbup: The window in the background sort of makes this look as if it were taking place in a Captain's Cabin, so I guess it's quite a bit more believable now. If you'd had some more time left, I would have totally spurred you on to check out the Captain's Cabin contest and use some inspiration for a little piece of appropriate furniture here, but... given the time you had for this entry, it is still a very nice improvement :) Good luck mate!
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#7 Meggie1

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Posted 14 December 2009 - 07:54 PM

I Love the Govonors Daughter. It made me cry!!

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