I absolutely enjoyed seeing this entry, most of all - its creativity! The idea is very well implemented, great job!
I'd most definitely give you bonus points for
your creativity (obviously!)
the wonderful SNOTty water & cliff (don't add any plants to it, it looks much more on the "raw" side that way!)
the flames look spot-on and so do the trans-clear round plates - perfect approach!
the inclusion of C-P members, funny as ever (hint hint: I'd love
to ride one of these babies one day... perhaps CGH and I could go head to head if you lend us the jets :D)
What I'd suggest as possible improvements
the jets look a tad bit too modern, which is not bad -- but I feel that if you used brown pieces instead of white ones, those would look as if they were made of wood... which would make this whole thing even more absurd & funny!
while I really like the small rock that the redcoat is jumping off of (and its outlines in the water!), I feel that if the jumper had been positioned at a slightly better angle (upwards, for example), that would have enhanced the sense of action.
the photos!!! Please, even if you don't update this MOC in any way (it's a strong contender as it is already!), just upload those photos to a different website - photobucket
come to mind as good alternatives, if you're not a fan of flickr. MOCpages has resized and compressed your pics in a terrible manner and your entry looks far less appealing precisely because of the way the photos are displayed. Please please upload them someplace else - you'll instantly notice the difference yourself!
Edited by TheOtters, 28 November 2009 - 01:57 PM.