Great work! I think that this is a very creative and well built MOC! I really like the concept of a "banana duel".
However, I have a few suggestions for this MOC:
*A lot of smooth plates / smooth tiles could be added to the floor of the MOC to add extra detail, I would prefer brown, but what TheOtters has suggested would work well too.
*I agree with what previous comments have said, the MOC could be more colorful. I think that maybe some vibrant solid-color flags (to promote different dueling contenders) could be added to the building and audience.
*The pirate captain with the gold hook should have his hat in a position so that the jolly roger faces the viewer.
*The building behind the audience would look much better if the windows and the door were different.
Don't fret about my suggestions, if you can't get the necessary bricks in order to fill out my completely subjective suggestions in time for the deadline, then oh well.
Edited by Bricknave, 25 November 2009 - 07:28 PM.