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#1 Graynar

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Posted 05 January 2006 - 04:14 AM

Hello everyone.

I hope this was the right place to post this.

I don't know if many people know about my website but I have just made an animated intro movie for it.

Here is my webpage by the way:The Kingdom of Sikaron

It may be a short cartoon, but it's kind of funny, and a lot like a video game.

Here it is:  http://i32.photobuck...ronmoviegif.gif


Enjoy, and please tell me what you think.  ;)

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Posted 05 January 2006 - 04:19 AM

I LOVE IT! Great job Graynar, your a man of true talent. Excuse me for saying, but it was a bit humorous  :-D I hope it expands to something bigger one day  *satis*

#3 Evil Willy

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Posted 05 January 2006 - 04:33 AM

It is really laggy..Maybe if it had sound and stuff it would be good..Make it smooth, its choppy. Sorry..But there was no enthusiasm in it for me

#4 Graynar

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Posted 05 January 2006 - 05:30 AM

Evil Willy wrote:

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It is really laggy..Maybe if it had sound and stuff it would be good..Make it smooth, its choppy. Sorry..But there was no enthusiasm in it for me

Oh, sorry about that. It's actually, supposed to be like that. ;)  If I added more frames it wouldn't seem as choppy. And the system I used dosen't allow sound, but if I could give it sound, I would.

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Posted 06 January 2006 - 03:49 AM

ouch, poor shadow knight...   :oo

I'm really scared now  8-|

#6 Lost Viking

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Posted 06 January 2006 - 04:39 AM

Raw!!! Look at my post count! Is that scary or what! (666) Anyways, I found it mildly funny, when the shadow knights got pwned ;) Great job!

#7 Kahgarak

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Posted 06 January 2006 - 10:11 AM

Awesome!!!!

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Posted 06 January 2006 - 02:08 PM

It is okay but a sword is for slicing and cutting.  You have the shadow knights being shredded apart like they hit with grape shot at under ten feet.  Consider toning down the mortal combat exaguration.

As far as the intro to a story all I see is a hero (I am guessing he is a hero as he does nothing heroic) runs into the enemy soldiers, turns them into lunchmeat and the runs toward the castle of an evil wizard.  Maybe you should consider adding something of a plot or a little extra outside of the mass violence and dark sorcery bit.

I like the lightning special effects.  The sword is nice.

#9 Graynar

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Posted 08 January 2006 - 09:05 PM

Alright, I changed the movie a bit. There is no longer lunch meat fighting scenes.

http://i32.photobuck...ikaronintro.gif

I hope this one is a bit better than the first. ;)

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Posted 08 January 2006 - 09:28 PM

Graynar, on Jan 8 2006, 09:05 PM, said:

Alright, I changed the movie a bit. There is no longer lunch meat fighting scenes.

http://i32.photobuck...ikaronintro.gif

I hope this one is a bit better than the first. ;)
I think the first version was much better. It was so OVERDONE that the chopping of the Evil soldiers made me smile. Also the way the good guy moved (laggy) gave it that LEGO touch - this is precisely how I imagine LEGO-figs to move.  :oD
So version 2 dissapoints me - sorry about that :/

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#11 The Hordesman

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Posted 08 January 2006 - 09:39 PM

I like it better, more serious and nicer in general.

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