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Battles Of Time-Chapter 3


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#1 Eskallon

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Posted 15 August 2009 - 07:58 PM

Hi
I made comic 3 and 4 together as they are both parts of the same story but anyway the first part is here. I think the gun shots were good in the comic, I made them in Gimp. I know nobody reads these comics but please comment if their is anyone out their. I mean 40 views and no replies and I don't even know if that includes guests. Anyway here you go.

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#2 Eskallon

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Posted 18 August 2009 - 01:41 PM

Thanks for so many replies everyone.

The next comic will be up tomorrow sometime.

#3 Zepher

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Posted 19 August 2009 - 02:10 AM

I can make a few suggestions.

1)  Go into everyone's history a bit more!  Take maybe an episode for each character to flesh them out a bit, make them real characters, not just people who are there to fight.

2)  Scenery is needed.  Always.  Never let anything that is not Lego show, it looks sloppy.

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#4 Eskallon

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Posted 19 August 2009 - 03:07 PM

Thanks for your comment Zepher. I will certainly be cutting out any non lego items from now on and this will take place on and after comic 5. I shall also be going into the history of them anyway as that was what I planned for episode 5.

Oh actully sometimes I will use a backdrop as shown in some of the other episodes.



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