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The Treasure of the Lost Mine: Chapter 3


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#1 Luke McAwesome

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Posted 03 August 2009 - 08:11 PM

Chapter 1 -- Chapter 2

Hey, everyone!

Well, these next few chapters will ve rather short until we get into the action, but for now, here's a little thwack in the head with a shovel kick off to get everything started.

(Don't understand what's going on? Check out the profiles of the characters here!)


A good "Thwack!" should clear your head.


Day: July 5
Time: 10:47 AM
The outskirts of Salt Lake City


James was walking to Starbricks Coffee Shop, excited, and thoughtful, of what this mysterious man may turn out to be like. And just how did he plan on helping him get his job back?


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Little did he know, that less than half a block away, two men were waiting for him to walk past.

Waiting... Or stalking?

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"Lionel, you know what to do," said the man in the brown jacket.

"Got it, do I kill him? Or just knock him out?" said the other man.

"Por qué tengo que trabajar con estos idiotas?!"

"Er, what?"

"Nothing, just hit him with the shovel, dang it!"

"Right."

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James continued his walking to his destination, which, unfortuneatly, he won't ever reach.

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*James singing* "F-R-E-E that spells free, Credit Report.com baby, saw their ads on my TV..." ( :tongue: )

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*James humming* "Hm-hm-hm-hm-hm..."

*THWACK!*

"YEOWCH!"

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James fell to the ground.

"He's out cold."

"Good work, Lionel. There may be a raise in your future."

"Oh goody!"

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As James was knocked out, he was dreaming... of nightmares.

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Suddenly, James awoke in an all white room... well, we aren't really sure if it's a room, or if he's dead. You decide!  :hmpf_bad:

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"Where am I?"

"Not too sure."

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"GAH!"

"Relax. We're here to help you!" said the man in the funny brown Robin Hood-esque hat.

"Who are you?"

"The name's Hinckley, and this is ImperialShadows and Striker."

"Hey, uh, Striker, you know, you look familiar..."

"I get that a lot."

"James, come with me," said Hinckley.

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"Get on."

"What?"

He pointed to a stretcher.

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"Get on."

"Alright."

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"Hey, Hinckley, am I dead?"

"Not yet..."

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"... But you will soon."

"What's the crossbow for?" asked James.

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"...We're not really sure." said the silly pirate by the name of ImperialShadows.

*WHIIIIIIIIR*

The chainsaw was up and running, and menacing.

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"Just close your eyes and think of Eurobricks."

"Wha-AAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!"

*splurt!*

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"Lionel, I think you killed him."

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"AAAAAAAAAGH!! STOP RIPPING OUT MY GUTSssss..."

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All will be understood in the next chapter. :laugh:

Thanks for reading. :sweet:

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#2 Commander Flash

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Posted 05 August 2009 - 11:08 PM

I like this chapter, especially with cameo appearances from IS and Hinkley  :classic:
Who exactly owns a yellow shovel?  :tongue:
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#3 Luke McAwesome

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Posted 06 August 2009 - 04:07 AM

View PostCommander Flash, on Aug 5 2009, 04:08 PM, said:

I like this chapter, especially with cameo appearances from IS and Hinkley  :classic:
Who exactly owns a yellow shovel?  :tongue:

Hehe, thanks.

It's lime, but who cares? And apparently, the bad guys own a "yellow" shovel.  :grin:
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Posted 06 August 2009 - 05:19 AM

What happened to the little TM in your name?! I remember one of your first sigs was "Oooh, I've been Trademarked!"
SUPAH CONFUSHON-INESS!!!! :grin:

Edited by YG-49, 06 August 2009 - 05:20 AM.

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Posted 06 August 2009 - 08:39 PM

Lol, good chapter! :thumbup:
I liked the cameos....

#6 Luke McAwesome

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Posted 07 August 2009 - 01:31 AM

View PostYG-49, on Aug 5 2009, 11:19 PM, said:

What happened to the little TM in your name?! I remember one of your first sigs was "Oooh, I've been Trademarked!"
SUPAH CONFUSHON-INESS!!!! :grin:

Let's talk about this through PM.   :grin:

View Postjust2good, on Aug 6 2009, 02:39 PM, said:

Lol, good chapter! :thumbup:
I liked the cameos....

Thanks, Just2Good.  :classic:
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#7 Tom Bricks

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Posted 07 August 2009 - 10:55 PM

Great work on this one, plenty of action and the ending has left me hanging. Keep up the good work.
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#8 Luke McAwesome

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Posted 08 August 2009 - 05:46 AM

View PostTom Bricks, on Aug 7 2009, 03:55 PM, said:

Great work on this one, plenty of action and the ending has left me hanging. Keep up the good work.

Thanks, Tom Bricks.

Next chapter should be up in the next two days.  :classic:
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