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[MOC] Republic Star Destroyer Venator


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#1 ACCLAMATOR

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Posted 29 June 2009 - 06:44 PM

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Under impression new cartoons Clone Wars I have constructed recently such model:
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Side view -back-up:
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Command tower and turbolaser the battery capable by one aim fire to destroy the whole squadron of fighters:
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The front view:
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Side view:
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The top view in front:
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The top view:
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I hope, you will like my model)
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#2 ADHO15

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Posted 29 June 2009 - 06:53 PM

That's a good model, ACCLAMATOR.

The shape is great and the overall design is good, however, some of the colours (blues/blacks) could be improved. I understand this can be difficult on large MOCs when you have a limited supply of bricks, so it's not that big an issue.
Also, the base could be improved. Instead of having the bottom flat, with the top plate overlapping, you could try rounding it off to make the top and bottom the same shape.

Great for a first try, though. :thumbup:

Welcome to Eurobricks, btw. I hope to see more of your work soon.

Edited by ADHO15, 29 June 2009 - 06:58 PM.

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#3 ACCLAMATOR

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Posted 29 June 2009 - 07:02 PM

Thanks, Jedi Knight! I shall take into account these minuses and I shall try to correct them further.

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Posted 29 June 2009 - 07:18 PM

View PostACCLAMATOR, on Jun 29 2009, 08:02 PM, said:

Thanks, Jedi Knight! I shall take into account these minuses and I shall try to correct them further.

:laugh: No problem.

I look forward to seeing your new and improved version.  :classic:
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#5 Jammiedodger

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Posted 29 June 2009 - 07:48 PM

Looking good there! :thumbup: It is a good size model and I think it will look great when it is completed. Maybe you will beat my Venator. :tongue:
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Posted 29 June 2009 - 08:21 PM

The overall design and structure are really quiet extraordinary. I would work on improving the color scheme. The blues, blacks, and whites don't really seem to go well with the red and gray. The turrets are very nice, but I would work on the command tower a bit more. Try adding some more overall detail. Other than those, it is a great MOC.
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Posted 29 June 2009 - 08:26 PM

Great Mod and well done.  I like it.  Like the others I feel that the tower needs more detail and work but well done to get this much done.

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Posted 30 June 2009 - 06:45 AM

I think it looks good for a MOC, sure the colours are a bit off, but it still looks good.

By the way, its the republic didn't call it a star destroyer, only the empire did.
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Posted 02 July 2009 - 08:10 PM

Very Nice for a first try ACCLAMATOR  :wub:
i agree with what people are saying here that maybe try to keep it to Greys and Reds but overall well done
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#10 Darth Lion

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Posted 02 July 2009 - 08:21 PM

Nice first posted moc  :thumbup:

But the four big laser cannons on both sides of the ship are a little big and the republic sign too small I think. (I know, that's a problem in this mid-scale version)

Thanks for sharing.  :thumbup:

Ahh wait, why didn't you build an ACCLAMATOR Cruiser?  :tongue:

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#11 prateek

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Posted 03 July 2009 - 12:54 AM

very good :thumbup: you just need to put a bottom half on

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Posted 03 July 2009 - 03:13 AM

you gave the venator a good shape to it. I know that you ay have a parts shortage but i think you did a pretty good job with them.

Great moc!

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Posted 03 July 2009 - 04:36 PM

Welcome to Eurobricks! This is truly a great model, but I have some suggestions that would make it look more like the real thing!

First off, all of that blue and black can be covered up easily. Maybe a little is good to make a shadow or something like that, but you have excess. Second, you can put a bottom half on. It doesn't have to be gray though, just as long as it looks more 3-D

This is really good so far!  :classic:
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