Carts+carriages, military, closed 4bThis is my first attempt at a carriage. Please leave suggestions on ways to improve the other carriages that will occupy my port.
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The Governor's Carriage
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 12:56 AM
Carts+carriages, military, closed 4bThis is my first attempt at a carriage. Please leave suggestions on ways to improve the other carriages that will occupy my port.
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 02:44 AM
Maybe you could work on the roof a little (tiles, ornaments, lamps, ect).
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 10:53 AM
Capt. Kirk, on May 31 2009, 04:44 AM, said:
Maybe you could work on the roof a little (tiles, ornaments, lamps, ect).
Anyway, I like your mansion and I like your carriage, so good luck with your port!
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 11:02 AM
Looks quite good already, i like the stretched ''limo'' '''lowrider'' look. 
That and maybe make it 1 brick higher so that figures would fit in?
Capt. Kirk, on May 31 2009, 03:44 AM, said:
Maybe you could work on the roof a little (tiles, ornaments, lamps, ect).
That and maybe make it 1 brick higher so that figures would fit in?
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 02:02 PM
Very nicely done - ingenious use of the hoses. I agree, perhaps some hanging lanterns may complete it.
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 03:39 PM
I think this looks very great! I agree with the others that it could be a little bit higher. And since it's a very large carriage, maybe you could add some horses to pull the heavy thing. For the rest it just looks very good
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 04:36 PM
Captain Green Hair, on May 31 2009, 05:02 AM, said:
That and maybe make it 1 brick higher so that figures would fit in?
Figures do fit inside I made sure of that.
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 06:28 PM
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Posted 01 June 2009 - 09:54 AM
Looks great! I love it.
The colours really give it a "royal" feeling. It's a bit long for a carriage I think but I still like the shape.
I would add small low fences on the roof, and lanterns to add some detail on it. Although it's very nicely decorated already.
The colours really give it a "royal" feeling. It's a bit long for a carriage I think but I still like the shape.
I would add small low fences on the roof, and lanterns to add some detail on it. Although it's very nicely decorated already.
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Posted 01 June 2009 - 02:33 PM
Great work Paul! I really like the effect you've achieved with the windows at an angle. Only thing I'd suggest is adding some decorations to the roof, but otherwise it's perfect!
Only thing I'd suggest is adding some decorations to the roof, but otherwise it's perfect!
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Posted 01 June 2009 - 06:04 PM
I love the design but I think you should shorten it up by at least 4 - 6 studs and 2 studs narrower. It is very beautiful though.
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