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#1 Natman8000

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 02:55 PM

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In the dawning of the Pirate Imperials, they were commonly found to be raiding villages inhibated by the islanders. And now, the new Islander Rebellion has started a new project and created several ships in defense. This is one of them.

It is a fusion of the A-wing, and the Islander theme.

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 05:53 PM

nice start, you captured the islander feel in it, my suggestion is that you try to make it resemble more like the a wing, like maybe adding spears as side cannons or etc.
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Posted 17 May 2009 - 06:59 PM

View PostArtizan, on May 17 2009, 09:53 AM, said:

nice start, you captured the islander feel in it, my suggestion is that you try to make it resemble more like the a wing, like maybe adding spears as side cannons or etc.
Actually, yesterday I was building on it, and I did just that. When I make it perfect You'll see. :classic:
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Posted 17 May 2009 - 09:17 PM

I have to say I totally agree with Artizan, and I think that if you improve it a little, it would be a great entry

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Posted 18 May 2009 - 11:28 PM

Updated. I'm still working on it, so keep in mind the isnt the final edition.
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Posted 19 May 2009 - 12:07 AM

It just looks like a flying rock  :tongue:

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Posted 19 May 2009 - 12:10 AM

View PostCloneCommanderDelta7, on May 18 2009, 06:07 PM, said:

It just looks like a flying rock  :tongue:

Haha, a flying rock in the shape of an A though!

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Posted 19 May 2009 - 12:16 AM

Too long and tall for the A wing.
Ought to be short and wide, with an obvious triangular shape when seen from above.

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Posted 19 May 2009 - 12:40 AM

View Postxenologer, on May 18 2009, 05:16 PM, said:

Too long and tall for the A wing.
Ought to be short and wide, with an obvious triangular shape when seen from above.
Yes, but it sort of is an A shape. Its really just an islander spaceship, that is a bit like an A-wing.
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Posted 19 May 2009 - 04:39 AM

Nice :thumbup: It's just, there's this beautiful rock and foresty type look, with all the green, and then there's a control panel. It really breaks the forest look.
Also, it's a little skinny.

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Posted 19 May 2009 - 05:15 AM

Its good but doesnt really look like an a wing.

I do like how you did the cockpit though its really good
I like how you used the rock for the fuselage.

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Posted 19 May 2009 - 08:34 AM

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 07:40 PM

That is really cool! King Kahuka is one of my favorite minifiguresand you created a great vehicle for him. I love the rocky details on the front.
Unlike everyone else, I think it looks like an A-wing. But, if you wanted it to look more like an A-wing, I suggest making the tail divide into two seperate parts, to look like the A-wing's rocket jets.
Great job!

View PostCloneCommanderDelta7, on May 18 2009, 07:07 PM, said:

It just looks like a flying rock  :tongue:

I also think it looks like a flying rock :laugh:

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 08:45 PM

I love the rock built A_wing fighter piloted by an Islander.  I imagine it is equipted with the latest Palm Frawn shields and coconut blasters! :pir-grin:
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Posted 05 June 2009 - 05:33 PM

lol, never knew King Kahuka was allied with the rebels. :tongue:
Maybe some extra palmleaves for the shape of a a-wing. :wink:
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Posted 08 June 2009 - 09:14 AM

Great entry, now where's that needed background story?
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