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WIP Ankh Morprok City Watch


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#1 L-space

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Posted 07 February 2009 - 02:04 PM

Hello, my first MOC based on the Discworld.

However I kinda ran out of inspiration.
I'm waiting on a few Bricklink orders, the window lattices and the frame for the prison cel door, before I can finish it.
And now I'm hoping for some feedback to make it better looking.
Anything welcome!

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The interior will be kept as a surprise, but it will include an office for the CO and a work area for the resident Igor.

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#2 Fordo Jumping

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Posted 07 February 2009 - 04:24 PM

nice play---I mean....nice MOC
but if you can show us the internal construcion
that will be nicer~~
and with some figures and spooky stories  :tongue:

#3 Captain Blackmoor

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Posted 07 February 2009 - 04:26 PM

I really like this, the wooden jail roof is awesome. I also like the balcony, it's a nice addition to the front of the building.
The front has some great details and ornaments on it which takes this WIP to a higher level. The torches are nice too.

Perhaps it is a good idea to tile the stairs for the intrance. You've done a great job with 'tiling' so far.
A tiled MOC is much more realistic in my opinion.  :thumbup:

Keep it up and I can't wait to see the finished product!

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#4 Batbrick

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Posted 08 February 2009 - 12:06 AM

Very neat, love the design. It's always good to ask for feedback. I think the colours need touching up. I'd get rid of those tan pieces as they don't really fit in, and add some red around the set more so the roof looks more natural. Apart from that, this is awesome looking.

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