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#1 Skinny Boy

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Posted 13 December 2008 - 01:34 PM

Part 12: Alleys, alleys everywhere, so lets go on the brink.

Last time, the group experienced a twist of fate (and faint) at the junkyard. Again, they were split into two teams: 1: Jack, Sid and Cpl. Hayes.  2: Captain, Nick, Carl and Cpl. Sang.
Jack's group went through the crushed cars and eventually ended up here:
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Posted Image Hayes: "Where are we?"  "Well, I see containers..."  Jack: "I see the ocean... so i'm guessing its a dockyard."

Posted Image "Empty."

Posted Image "Same here."  Jack: "Great-

Posted Image -I'm exhausted.-

Posted Image -We'll check the containers in the morning."

The morning.
North East of the dockyard. Team 2 is so close to the hospital, they can smell it. They are in the parking lot of a skyscraper:
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Posted Image "Well, we ain't gettin through that anytime soon. Sang. Check out the building."

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Several minutes later:
Posted Image "Ground floor's clear, but its about 5 or 6 high."

Posted Image Captain: "Alright. Maybe we'll be able to see an alternate route from an altitude."

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Posted Image "What is that?"

Posted Image "It looks like a broadcasting booth. I think this is a radio station."

Posted Image Sang: "Oh." Captain: "What?"

Posted Image "Its operational."

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Thanks for looking. Part 13, may be tomorrow, i'm unsure, so keep checking the forums.
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#2 Lego12

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Posted 13 December 2008 - 04:14 PM

You suck, Skinny Boy! :pir-cry_sad: I wanted it to be longer! :pir_bawling:  :pir-tongue: I really like your comics and this one is my favorite, because its suspensful and they are discovering new areas! I want to see Part 13, now! :pir-devil:
"One without strength is one without purpose."

"You never know, until you know."

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#3 Zepher

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Posted 13 December 2008 - 07:43 PM

Next part:  Lucky 13.  Did they ever find the college drop-out?

Anyways, it's very nice.  The sets keep gettting better and better, and the stories good too.  Great work as always!

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#4 Skinny Boy

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Posted 14 December 2008 - 11:44 AM

View PostZepher, on Dec 13 2008, 07:43 PM, said:

Next part:  Lucky 13.  Did they ever find the college drop-out?

Anyways, it's very nice.  The sets keep gettting better and better, and the stories good too.  Great work as always!
Actually the next part has nothing to do with its number!
Erm, yes, in the last part, 11. Don't you remember? Sid was laying under a shelter when the group arrived.

Thanks for the comment on the sets. I thought people wouldn't like this one because the carpark was so bare, but is supposed to be... eery  :pir-skull:


I'm unsure of the next part being today. It could be, because its very simple, yet I don't have a lot of free time today. So, who knows.
Thanks guys.
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#5 Professor Flitwick

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Posted 14 December 2008 - 01:19 PM

Bravo, another great issue! I wonder whether, they'll make contact with other servivers beside team 1? In issue 13, will we see the skyscraper from the outside.

Do you realise whenever I read your fantastic comics, I wanted to play'Left 4 Dead'. Guess I need to buy it first... :pir-sceptic:

I'm Agnostic and ambivalent about it.

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#6 Skinny Boy

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Posted 14 December 2008 - 03:00 PM

View Postprofessor flitwick, on Dec 14 2008, 01:19 PM, said:

Bravo, another great issue! I wonder whether, they'll make contact with other servivers beside team 1? In issue 13, will we see the skyscraper from the outside.
Thanks prof!
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