Okay, I have finished the final version of Lust's Streetside Hair Salon.
Some changes: the minifig in the window has been changed, the pictures have been taken with a better camera, I found another plume, so I was able to leave the smaller one on top of the shaved woman's head, I added another lilypad, and I added a parrot to the roof.
I wasn't able to add tiles to the roof due to a lack of pieces, same for the white tiles around the pier supports... :/
Also, I didn't add any barrels or lanterns, because, when I did, it looked to crowded for my tastes. The street wasn't smoothed out either, simply because I like how it looks weathered and beaten.
Your terrified women have the same head.
At first, I didn't know what you meant by this, but looking closer, I could see how they look the same. One is actually a standard scared woman head and the other is one of those new Agents heads.
Thanks for all the suggestions, comments, and praise guys! It was much appreciated, and I think it helped the final product out immensely!