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The Raid on the Governor's Mansion - Final


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25 replies to this topic  – Started by Paul cantu , Nov 08 2008 09:38 PM

#26 Legoking

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Posted 22 November 2008 - 12:22 AM

Opinion
This is a great MOC Paul cantu. The battle that is going on in front of the governor's house looks very brutal. The little monkey that is standing on top of the mansion is funny. The cannon manned by the pirate looks like it can demolish the governor's house in a couple of shots. Another thing that I noticed that I liked is that you put coconuts on the palm trees. That is the first time I have ever seen someone do that. There is lots of blood in your MOC, which I like.

Possible Improvements

1) I think you should put some black tiles on the roof.

2) Possibly, you could put some green and gray tiles on the ground if you have enough.

Overall- I have looked at your MOC since the beginning and you have made some good improvements. I personally think your first picture is the best. Some little things I would fix. I wish you the best of luck!

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