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29 replies to this topic  – Started by JimBee , Oct 14 2008 01:07 AM

#26 DarthPineapple

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Posted 18 October 2008 - 04:03 PM

It looks very nice, I like the overall look of the chaos. Perhaps you could work on the blood, it's very uneven.

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Posted 18 October 2008 - 04:57 PM

that's way better now ! I liked the first version, but I think now that's great, I don't really know how to improve it. is that blood near the skinned guy on the ground ? that's gore^^ I like it  :thumbup:
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#28 JimBee

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Posted 18 October 2008 - 08:15 PM

View PostDarthPineapple, on Oct 18 2008, 10:03 AM, said:

It looks very nice, I like the overall look of the chaos. Perhaps you could work on the blood, it's very uneven.
Thanks, but I'm not sure what you mean by the blood being "uneven".

View PostGuss, on Oct 18 2008, 10:57 AM, said:

that's way better now ! I liked the first version, but I think now that's great, I don't really know how to improve it. is that blood near the skinned guy on the ground ? that's gore^^ I like it  :thumbup:
Thanks, Guss. :pir-classic: Yes, that's a ton of blood on the ground by the fruit seller. :pir-devil:

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#29 DarthPineapple

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Posted 18 October 2008 - 08:35 PM

View PostJimButcher, on Oct 18 2008, 10:15 PM, said:

Thanks, but I'm not sure what you mean by the blood being "uneven".

Sorry, I was a bit unclear. I mean that your blood has all kinds of different bricks in it, tiles, round studs, cones. Real blood doesn't look like that. Stick with just tiles.

#30 JimBee

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Posted 18 October 2008 - 10:16 PM

Ah, now I see what you mean. The cones are supposed to represent dripping blood. There are three cones in this MOC. One represents blood dripping from the skinned marketer, one represents blood spewing out of another villager's mouth, and the last is blood splatter. As for the rest, I used what I had. I'll keep your suggestion in mind for future MOCs, though!

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