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#1 Clonecommando007

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 02:30 AM

Greetings Eurobrickers!

Here is the link to each of the comics so far, excepting the second comic, which is in this original post.
Comic 1 Arrival on Helioscaunt

Comic 3 Airborne Flash

Comic 4 Advance

Comic 5 The Lost Boys

Comic 6 Men Down

Comic 7 Back in White

Comic 8 No Soldier Left Behind
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Here is my second comic in the series (hopefully ongoing), called 'Holding the Line'.  My legion has four seperate regiments, and every few comics I'll switch up Regiments.  
Anyways, on to the comic!
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How did you like it?  I rather liked it, but the judgement is up to you.
Hint on the next comic: Airborne

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#2 Zepher

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 02:32 AM

I really like it, i'll drop you a longer comment on CABG!   :thumbup:

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 04:09 AM

Another great comic Clonecommando007  :thumbup: .

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 06:58 AM

View Postdarkrebellion, on Oct 11 2008, 11:09 AM, said:

Another great comic Clonecommando007  :thumbup: .

i don't know why, but i actually prefer this one to the previus episode. lol.

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 12:47 PM

I love this comic!I agree with you ditto that this comic was better!It had more action and suspense!By the way,can you include a bit more action like making some clones die cause althogh I love clones! :classic: Its quite weird to see that they hve no casualties.Besides that,excellent comic! :sweet:
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 01:04 PM

Glad you all like it!  I will be adding more 'dying clones' to my comics, though I refrained from that in these because I wanted to put the focus on the injured General.

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 10:02 PM

Poor genral he has all that attention on him  :cry_sad: but he one hec of trooper  :knight:. is he Plo Koon or just the same species?
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 11:24 PM

View PostTim Bit, on Oct 11 2008, 11:02 PM, said:

Poor genral he has all that attention on him  :cry_sad: but he one hec of trooper  :knight:. is he Plo Koon or just the same species?
I wouldn't have much respect for cannon if he was Plo koon.  He's just the same species - He's General Aarr of the 54th Infantry Regiment.

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 11:32 PM

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How did you like it? I rather liked it, but the judgement is up to you.
Hint on the next comic: Airborne

Your comic is awesome, Clonecommando007, I like the large armies of minifigs you used for creating this MOC, and the background is great too.
The story is OK, but maybe you should try to improve the quality of your pictures next time.

Overall opinion: :thumbup:

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Posted 12 October 2008 - 08:37 PM

What a GREAT comic! I liked it very much. All the MOC, minifigures, and ships, make it very impressive! :classic: Can't wait to see more!
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Posted 13 October 2008 - 01:43 AM

Really excellent comic, CC007!!  :thumbup: I like the chain gun a lot, and the action is displayed very well. The fake snow was a great idea for the fog, it really makes the whole thing come alive. Your clone regiment is good too. :wink:

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Posted 18 October 2008 - 12:45 AM

nice how did u get those clones with the leg padding. i know fine clonier, but do u buy them or download them?
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#13 Clonecommando007

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Posted 18 October 2008 - 02:43 PM

View PostiH Master 13uilder17, on Oct 18 2008, 01:45 AM, said:

nice how did u get those clones with the leg padding. i know fine clonier, but do u buy them or download them?
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Thanks for all the comments, again!

I hope to get into more plot and reveal different types of troopers as the comic goes on.  After all, a Legion has four regiments, and I've only shown one, and each regiment in the 222nd is different, and each will be featured.

Prepare for Airborne, upcoming!!

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Posted 18 October 2008 - 03:39 PM

View PostClonecommando007, on Oct 18 2008, 04:43 PM, said:

Prepare for Airborne, upcoming!!

Sounds interesting, I can't wait! When will we see it (at the CABG) ?  :tongue:

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Posted 18 October 2008 - 03:51 PM

This is really good. I like how you made the clones talk instead of having a description under it.
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Posted 22 October 2008 - 12:48 AM

View PostDarthPineapple, on Oct 18 2008, 03:39 PM, said:

Sounds interesting, I can't wait! When will we see it (at the CABG) ?  :tongue:

Of course the Clone Army Builders Guild gets everything of mine first - and work in progress pictrues.  But it'll probably be up in a few weeks.

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Posted 29 October 2008 - 10:57 PM

Greetings Eurobricks!
I now give you the longest so far of the three 222nd Legion Chronicle entries.  This one is titled 'Airborne Flash'.  
See it for yourself, and don't forget to look in the previous pages of the Clone Army Creations forum to see more entries from the 222nd Legion Chronicles.

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The fleet admiral's armor is the design made the CABG member J4ke. Nice work Jake!

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Posted 30 October 2008 - 03:08 AM

By far your best episode yet, CC007! :thumbup: I really like how you represented the battle on the hologram, very clever. Kind of reminded me of my Battlefront days... By the way, when the Commander starts to daydream, the thinking bubble in that pic got cut off.

EDIT: Oh, I see, it was a flashback, sorry. Nice custom backpacks, by the way. :sweet:

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Posted 30 October 2008 - 04:22 PM

Cool Airborne flash is my favorite episode yet.
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#20 ditto

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Posted 30 October 2008 - 05:09 PM

a lot more action and dialogue in your latest one!

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Posted 02 November 2008 - 12:29 AM

I loved that but I didn't really understand it.
So could someone tell what happened at the end.
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Posted 02 November 2008 - 01:12 AM

At the beginning several commanders met, then one of them had a flashback to a battle. Then at the end, they go back to that meeting.
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#23 Tim Bit

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Posted 02 November 2008 - 04:19 PM

Thanks for that Bob.
I couldn't figure out if it was a flashback or a premonition.
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#24 Zepher

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Posted 02 November 2008 - 04:30 PM

Again, I love it.  With that many characters, you can really have some different and cool storylines, as well as some deaths (hint, hint)

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#25 Tim Bit

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Posted 03 November 2008 - 04:37 PM

One thing. Are we going to see the genral again?(You know the guy with plos head)


One more thing does anyone notice the guy with foxs body whisper sideous himself?

Edited by Tim Bit, 03 November 2008 - 04:40 PM.

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