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[El Bucanero]

Captain Green Hair and Mr Tiber proudly present, EB pirates! , a new comic for the pirate forum.

Enjoy!

[ExoBuilder]

This is a great comic Mr. Tiber! ( And a long one that is )
I really liked Captain Greenhairs dad, it's sad he died though :'-(

I tried to call 0800-Tiber but noone picked up? Is this a joke or something?


*y*

[Commander Andrew of 501 st]

funny  but sad that green beard died

[Commander Red Hat]

Ah well, Green hair is still alive to continue the family business :-D

[ExoBuilder]

Captain green hair, on Dec 22 2007, 04:03 PM, said:

Ah well, Green hair is still alive to continue the family business :-D

Oh....Like we said, it's a shame your dad died! :-D  :-P  X-D

[ZeekyBoogeyDoog]

Very funny, especially the random exercise machine ad *y* !

[Batbrick]

Hilarious!  *y*
Great work guys, I love the random commercial, and the "deja vu" part  :-D
I can't wait to see the next one, this one was great!

And good photography too!  *y*

Nothing to Say, but pirate Batbrick Away!  >:-)

[Lord Of Pies]

That was very amusing! The odd advert in the middle of it all made me laugh!

Keep up the good work. *y*

Edited by Lord Of Pies, 07 January 2008 - 05:08 PM.

[Col. Whipstick]

Ugh those commercial breaks!  As if tv wasn't bad enough they've invaded our comics!  I would ask for Miss Bikini 1728's phonenumber but I imagine that wench isn't looking too healthy anymore...  :-X

That must have been a lot of hard work guys, how many hours do you recon went into it?

[TinyPiesRUs]

Ha! Very nice  :-D  I especially like Hairy Ruben's appearance, the commercial and the pirate having to swim  *y*  *y*

I look forward to the next episode. :-)

[Captain K.]

Mr. Tiber,

a very beautiful and funny comic strip. I have liked very much. I already look forward to the second part!
The advertising was also funny. Very cool!!!

Capt. K.

[Wout]

yeah!, the abfit 2000 or something.
Now we know why the pirates are so healthy lol

Nice comic

[El Bucanero]

Thanks for your nice words!  *sweet*

Exobuilder, on Dec 22 2007, 09:41 PM, said:

This is a great comic Mr. Tiber! ( And a long one that is )

Captain K., on Dec 23 2007, 02:33 PM, said:

Mr. Tiber,

Thanks! But please remind Captain Green Hair and I had an equal share in this comic.

Col. Whipstick, on Dec 22 2007, 11:28 PM, said:

That must have been a lot of hard work guys, how many hours do you recon went into it?

No idea actually.. Perhaps a couple of weeks?

[Zuloon]

The best part was not the comic, but the boat.

X-D

Edited by Zuloon, 24 December 2007 - 10:26 PM.

[Commander Red Hat]

Well i am doubting your sense of humor then...but thanks for the compliment!

The ship can be seen in my BS folder, a link is in my signature.

[Errorist]

gotta love this comic  *sweet*
congratulations to the both of you Captain Greenhair and Mr Tiber for this nice job *y*

Edited by Errorist, 27 December 2007 - 12:25 PM.

[Captain Cavinano]

*y* Cool!!! *y*

[Shadows]

Very nice! Great ship, island scenery, a good solid plot with plenty of action, and a bikini babe. All around winner there! *y*

I'd only make one adjustment, and while it's an easy one, it makes a pretty dramatic difference. The font/script/speech balloons could use a bit of refining. A bigger font, a little bit of editing into more standardized English, better looking balloons. Get that part of it perfected, and you've got the whole thing down.

Either way, I'm looking forward to the continued exploits of our young and upcoming new Captain and congratulate you both on a job well done!

OH! And I loved the islander translations! ;-)

[Jipay]

Laughed a lot, excellent comic ! Keep the chicks comin ! The ads part was hilarious  :-P

[Mister Phes]

Col. Whipstick, on Dec 23 2007, 09:28 AM, said:

Ugh those commercial breaks!  As if tv wasn't bad enough they've invaded our comics!

Isn't what they've done here technically called "product placement" whereby they advertise a product by including in the story, whether it be prominent or incident.  In this instance it's obviously very prominent.

[Hairy Ruben]

I must say that I loved it. The ads part was pure genius, miss bikini 1728. HA!
I also adore the word muscle shine. Makes me think of Jean-Claude van Damme or Arnold Schwarzenegger all rubbed in vaseline. 8-°  X-D

They ought to add that word to the dictionary.

Keep 'm coming *y*  :'-)

[Commander Red Hat]

Hairy Ruben, on Dec 31 2007, 11:43 AM, said:

I must say that I loved it. The ads part was pure genius, miss bikini 1728. HA!
I also adore the word muscle shine. Makes me think of Jean-Claude van Damme or Arnold Schwarzenegger all rubbed in vaseline. 8-°  X-D

They ought to add that word to the dictionary.

Keep 'm coming *y*  :'-)

You do know how to schock people, dont you Ruben?? :-P

[AgentRick57]

I really liked the comic, but I noticed one thing. After the battle where the pirate on the rope said "wait!", there was no symbol on the back part, but at the end of the comic, the blank symbol was replaced with a red one with white X's. What's up with that?

[MicVash]

Funny comic!  :-D   The commercial break was ingenious!  I don't think MicVash needs one of those though.  X-D Poor Green Hair... 8-|  I really like the Hairy Shark scene!  I laughed when I saw the soldier swimming for his dear life!

[Commander Red Hat]

AgentRick57, on Jan 2 2008, 03:31 AM, said:

I really liked the comic, but I noticed one thing. After the battle where the pirate on the rope said "wait!", there was no symbol on the back part, but at the end of the comic, the blank symbol was replaced with a red one with white X's. What's up with that?

I think the second from last picture explains that...?


Thanks for all the nice words guys! *y*

The next part will have better text balloons! *sweet*