StarHawk3 Posted May 30, 2016 (edited) Location:Tyrant hangar bay. B06 Sorn Tags: Military Building, Land Vehicle - -Be on alert W2-188. The commander is bringing the MANTIS prisoner here to meet with the Captain. They have been known to use every dirty trick in the book and usually go down fighting even when the odds are against them. - W2 has heard that MANTIS has a great AI benefits package. I knew an Octan Labor-bot that joined MANTIS, and has........ - Don't let the Commander hear you talking like that. She wouldn't hesitate to wipe your memory core. - - One Bug delivered as promised. - I have a question for you about MANTIS AI benefits. Is it true that AI's in MANTIS get vacation time and a retirement plan. - If you can get me out of here, I will make sure that you get any thin........ -That will be enough from you. Keep your mouth shut until the Captain gets here. - - Well I never thought I would see you again Dax. It sure is a small galaxy. I had heard rumors that you were shot down and....... - You not talk to the Captain unless speeked to first. - It's OK Thrugg. Hawk and I go back a long way. He has saved my life countless times in the service and can speak to me as he wishes. Plus you, me and Commander Aalyia need to have a talk about following my orders. He was not to be harmed. Please remove his restraints. Yes sir. Right away. - - It is good to see you again friend and I welcome you to my ship, the Tyrant. I had been watching you from a distance since you became Third branch executive. - I'd never take you as the space Pirate type. How did you manage to get your hands on a Kawashita freighter? -We prefer to be called the Thorn Mercenaries. We offer our services to many races here in Andromeda. Most of our clients don't trust the corporations, so they hire us to protect against them. Many of our recruits come from those races so please forgive my crew for their unfriendly actions. We could talk for hours catching up on the past but time is short. Your allies will be here soon thanks to Thrugg and we plan on being far from here when they arrive. - Why did you bring me here? You could have just sent me a holo message. - I have some sensitive information you might find interesting. I recently acquired it from a former client. Take this data card. Don't trust it with anyone in MANTIS. It will make more sense when you see it. The Commander Aalyia will fly you back to your speeder wreckage. It was good seeing you again friend. - Thank you and goodbye Dax. More pictures under the spoiler tag. - - - Thanks for looking. It was a much longer story then I usually do so thanks for reading too. C&C welcomed. Edited May 30, 2016 by StarHawk3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soccerkid6 Posted May 30, 2016 That's a wonderful mech The new pyramid slopes look great on it! Sweet sci fi interior as well, you've really got those down Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rodiziorobs Posted May 31, 2016 I love the AI (and its personality!), and like sk said, the interior is really top-notch. Great story, too, I look forward to reading more! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dannylonglegs Posted May 31, 2016 Man, I can't tell which is awesomer, the Hangar, the Bot, or the story developments! Truly everything is on point. The shaping in the bot is awesome! Just as threatening as the ship last week, and the Tyrant from the week prior. I think it's kind-of your style at this point, and it's great! The hangar is a wonderful! A realistically messy and grey well-detailed setpiece. And the story developments are great too! The characters are interesting, and I can't wait to see what secrets that data chip holds! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StarHawk3 Posted June 1, 2016 I love the AI (and its personality!), and like sk said, the interior is really top-notch. Great story, too, I look forward to reading more! Thanks rodiziorobs. Hawk was trying to steal a robot like a lot of MANTIS employees seem to do, but it didn't quite work out for him. That's a wonderful mech The new pyramid slopes look great on it! Sweet sci fi interior as well, you've really got those down Thanks SK. I've been wanting to find a way to use those pyramid pieces and I think they make the mech look just a little more though. Man, I can't tell which is awesomer, the Hangar, the Bot, or the story developments! Truly everything is on point. The shaping in the bot is awesome! Just as threatening as the ship last week, and the Tyrant from the week prior. I think it's kind-of your style at this point, and it's great! The hangar is a wonderful! A realistically messy and grey well-detailed setpiece. And the story developments are great too! The characters are interesting, and I can't wait to see what secrets that data chip holds! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Thanks. I'm glad you like it. I am really happy with how all of the Mercenary vehicles turned out too. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andromedas Gates Posted June 1, 2016 The judges awarded you 6 points. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
