rodiziorobs Posted March 28, 2016 (edited) Location: F03 (Forring) Tags: Military Building, Spying **************** MANTIS military academy, Forring ...and so, cadets, that is how fleet maneuvering works, leading us to MANTIS' current position in northern Andromeda. Given the tenuous relationships between our corporations lately, MANTIS has not been able to perform full-scale military incursions. However, we must maintain our fleet ever-ready, even anticipating-- General Teague, I hate to interrupt you but this is urgent. What is it, Maynes? It's Blond. Agent Blond? Yes Sir. I'm on my way. Students, please read sections 10.2-10.5 while I am gone, Shearer you lead the discussion questions. I'll be back shortly. Colter are you texting in class?! **************** [ Well, sir, we've got the tracer back online, after Blond's signal blinked out. Looks like the Zoid ship made a gate jump, that's what caused the malfunction. So where are they? Do we know what has become of Blond? Still gathering that intel, General. But, I was analyzing the last bit of thermal imaging from Blond's report--the one that convinced the court to sentence Laszlowe--and things don't add up. How so? Well, the scanner picked up five signatures, all of them human. So? We know the Zoids had slaves aboard the ship at that moment, maybe there were more, and that's where the extra signatures came from. Except there were no Zoid signatures at all. Only human ones. Look for yourself. Well, I'll be. That certainly is odd. Yet even in his testimony, Laszlowe confessed he had been meeting with Zoid agents, so how can this be? I think someone has been trying to hoodwink all of Andromeda, Sir. Is Blond's signal live? Yes, Sir, but I have yet to completely decode the data packets. Well, keep on it, and let me know what you find. Good work, Maynes. Thank you Sir. **************** Class dismissed ***************** C&C welcome! Edited March 28, 2016 by rodiziorobs Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VK-318 Posted March 28, 2016 The plot thickens! I like this build a lot. The only change I could suggest would be to use a tiled, opaque backdrop for the galaxy map. Right now it looks very irregular. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StarHawk3 Posted March 28, 2016 I like the galaxy map. How many different ways have you found to brick build the MANTIS symbol? The small one in the generals office is really cool. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Big Sal Posted March 28, 2016 Nice idea with the map! It's a shame the photos are a bit grainy. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Junior Shark Posted March 28, 2016 The galaxy map is nice. As always, the brick-built Mantis symbol is Ace! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kodan Black Posted March 29, 2016 I like the accurate galaxy map, I just wish the crossed lines were used to highlight something. Either one of the fleets or something, right now it seems to just be off center from the one planet. And yes, great logo as always. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SpacerSteve Posted March 30, 2016 I like your story! It is getting mysterious. I like your galaxy map a lot! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andromedas Gates Posted March 30, 2016 The judges awarded you 3 points. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites