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16 replies to this topic  – Started by cyryl , Aug 10 2007 09:35 AM

#1 cyryl

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 09:35 AM

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This is second version my new ship "Revenge". He have new, white cabin!

I really hope you will like my "Revenge"  :-D

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#2 El Bucanero

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 10:14 AM

Looks way better than the sloop version! It seems to me the cabin and the sails are improved?

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 10:18 AM

Nicely done!

I think the stern looks much better now, and the white colour of the cabin is perfect.  :'-)

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 10:40 AM

The sails are very nice and I like some of the detailing. A fine use of brick built cannon and the shark makes me smile for some reason.

Only thing that seems out of place is that hull. Looks like something more matched to a late 19th century steamship that still would have carried sails for reserve use.

Beyond that, I'd move the two slopes on either side of the cabin windows up one brick to cover the gap exposed by their angle (where they meet the window) and maybe angle the ladder lower (remove the 2 bricks where it meets the deck and replace them with a couple of plates placed maybe 4 studs closer to the cabin or simply have the ladder go straight down, I think it would fit perfectly and more naturally.

Overall, nice work!  *y*

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#5 Bonaparte

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 11:19 AM

This is a immense improvement over the first version.
If you manage to make the cabin look a bit more integrated, you can still improve it a bit.
I would make a white border around the deck or something like that.
But you did a great job on the masts, sails and the figure-head.

I've added a picture to your first post...

Edited by Bonaparte, 10 August 2007 - 11:20 AM.

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#6 El Bucanero

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 01:14 PM

View PostBonaparte, on Aug 10 2007, 01:19 PM, said:

I've added a picture to your first post...

You did? How did you get the picture?

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 01:27 PM

View PostMr Tiber, on Aug 10 2007, 01:14 PM, said:

You did? How did you get the picture?

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#8 cyryl

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 01:30 PM

View PostBonaparte, on Aug 10 2007, 11:19 AM, said:

I've added a picture to your first post...
Thanks Mr. Bonaparte! But what do you think about my private gallery?

Link to gallery - http://www.mocgallery.republika.pl/

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#9 ZeekyBoogeyDoog

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 04:46 PM

The cabin is much better than the old one.  Great job  *y* !

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 05:41 PM

View Postcyryl, on Aug 10 2007, 01:30 PM, said:

But what do you think about my private gallery?

What I think of your private gallery? wspaniały
You've got a nice collection of MOCs.
I also like your space MOCs.
You should post those in our space section.
Or maybe you already did?

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#11 cyryl

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 08:02 PM

View PostBonaparte, on Aug 10 2007, 05:41 PM, said:

What I think of your private gallery? wspaniały
Thanks :-D  :-D But no "wspaniały" however "wspaniała"!

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#12 Bonaparte

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 09:53 PM

View Postcyryl, on Aug 10 2007, 08:02 PM, said:

Thanks :-D  :-D But no "wspaniały" however "wspaniała"!

My Polish is a bit rusty ;-) .
I hope i didn't say anything insulting  :-D

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#13 SirNadroj

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Posted 10 August 2007 - 10:13 PM

Great use of that hull!  *y*

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Posted 11 August 2007 - 08:30 AM

View PostBonaparte, on Aug 10 2007, 09:53 PM, said:

I hope i didn't say anything insulting  :-D
No, you write other genus:
Wspaniały -  mannish
Wspaniała -  feminine

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Posted 11 August 2007 - 01:57 PM

View PostBonaparte, on Aug 10 2007, 06:27 AM, said:

Print Screen and paste in any graphics program (like paint) to cut the image out.
Thanx B *y*
I was able to add this ship to the Index of MOC Ships *y*


Cyryl,
Your capatain's cabin skills are improving *y*
Good job *y*

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#16 cyryl

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Posted 11 August 2007 - 03:28 PM

Thanks all!  *sweet*

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 07:15 PM

*wub* Third (and last) :-D  Version is coming!




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