Eskallon Posted August 15, 2009 Hi I made comic 3 and 4 together as they are both parts of the same story but anyway the first part is here. I think the gun shots were good in the comic, I made them in Gimp. I know nobody reads these comics but please comment if their is anyone out their. I mean 40 views and no replies and I don't even know if that includes guests. Anyway here you go. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Eskallon Posted August 18, 2009 Thanks for so many replies everyone. The next comic will be up tomorrow sometime. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zepher Posted August 19, 2009 I can make a few suggestions. 1) Go into everyone's history a bit more! Take maybe an episode for each character to flesh them out a bit, make them real characters, not just people who are there to fight. 2) Scenery is needed. Always. Never let anything that is not Lego show, it looks sloppy. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Eskallon Posted August 19, 2009 Thanks for your comment Zepher. I will certainly be cutting out any non lego items from now on and this will take place on and after comic 5. I shall also be going into the history of them anyway as that was what I planned for episode 5. Oh actully sometimes I will use a backdrop as shown in some of the other episodes. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
