MacK, on Apr 18 2008, 08:58 AM, said:
Great work I love all the little details you've thrown into this ship

. The dragon looks great as a figure head, are those small black dragons on the rail custom. Is there an interior for this ship, as there are no pics of an intterior. I hope to build something as big as this ship one day

.
Thanks. And as Quarryman pointed out, the little dragons are from
4766 Graveyard Duel. Those were the last pieces I put on the MOC. A last minute bit of inspiration. I was grabbing snakes for the stern and found the baby dragons and knew they would make a great little finishing touch. It give the ship that extra bit of personality and I couldn't imagine the ship without them.
Quarryman, on Apr 18 2008, 09:54 AM, said:
And also, thanks for making me aware of the Radiant-Kestrel, hadn't seen it before, it's great

I really found that creation very inspiring. I can't point to any technique I used from it, besides the Tie cockpits

but the feeling is one I was striving for. Thanks for the feedback!
Sir Dillon, on Apr 18 2008, 10:18 AM, said:
Wow, this is really something! It made me smile.
You've done a very nice job with the overall shape of the ship. I like how you've taken advantage of the fact it wouldn't be water bound by adding various windows and designs on the lower hull. The use of a wagon wheel as a window looks very nice.
All the steampunk details are neat. I especially like the front mast thing (the bow, I believe?) and the area behind the steering platform (heh heh, perhaps a pirate could help me out with the terms?

)
The only thing I don't like is the TIE Fighter windscreen... I think the idea of a big window there is good, but this one just looks out of place to me.
I don't know what this ship is going to be used for, but wouldn't it be wise to have some sort of weaponry on board? I see what looks like a cannon port
[here], but I don't think it'd be much use, because it'd just shoot the engine. I believe a large steam cannon on the deck could look pretty cool.
Overall this is a very cool creation. I look forward to the comic!
Thank man! All good points as usual. The mast thingy on the front is called a bowsprite. I learned that from chatting with Captain Green Hair. And yes, there are cannons behind those ports and they do aim right past the tank. They are stealth cannons, you wouldn't expect them and you can't see them. They're under the deck though, so I didn't take any photographs of them as I was tired when I was photographing and posting it. I will think about a steam-cannon, but there are two more ports on the stern I haven't added weapons to yet...Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad it made you smile.
phred, on Apr 18 2008, 12:22 PM, said:
I really like it!
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It looks like Cap'n Green Hair combed his hair.
P
Thanks phred! I enjoy getting feedback from real Pirates! Captain Green Hair combed his hair when he saw he would be photographed.
Oky Wan Kenobi, on Apr 19 2008, 12:24 AM, said:

NIIICE!
Such detail! I love it! Even though it doesn't make sense whatsoever how this monstrocity is supposed to stay airborne with just 2 engines!
Gotta love air pirates!

Thanks and good point. I guess it's imagination-powered.
imperialshadows, on Apr 19 2008, 12:50 AM, said:
Beautiful! If any single part screams steampunk ship to me, it's the TIE cockpit, and there it is, right where I'd want it.
Hmmm... I need to learn what it's called, but the railing/hull top between the fore and aft sections, the area in the dead center where it curves down... LOVE IT. My eye is drawn straight there by it's perfect shape.
I can definitely see the Santa Maria influence in her hull, and the rigging setup looks fine to me. With steampunk, I never expect fancy ships rigging since it isn't being relied upon for full propulsion. Oh, and I think the netting trick works well too.
It's just seriously amazing, I can find no actual fault with it, but I'm required by the laws of commentary on Hinckley creations to come up with one.
So, what's up with that tan railing. Not sure why it just nags at me to be a different colour, but it does.
Now I just have to figure out how to convince Mister Phes that this constitutes a Pirate creation so we can frontpage it when the associated issue of The Whacker and the Walrus comes out, for some nice cross promotion.

Thanks! And screw you with the tan railings. I thought we were friends.

The railing/hull top curving down was really fun to build and I love the way it turned out.
Cross-promotion? I need no promotion. I'm not in it for the glory, I'm in it for the art...

..whatever. Cross-promotion sounds great, let's talk about it...
dragonator, on Apr 19 2008, 01:19 AM, said:
Hinckley, you are amazing!
This is simply stunning, you have put a tremendous effort into it, and this shows! I like the general shape, it is very well done, with a sleek and fitting hull, although I do ...
The back section is very nice, some great details and a nice use of the TIE cockpit.

Dose thos ship have interior? I guess we'll find out in the next episode...
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Thanks so much dragonator! I had big plans for the interior, and Captain Green Hair had a request list, but I gave up on that for time's sake. It was taking me forever to build it. The interior will be shown in upcoming episodes and I will probably build them separately for photographing purposes...
Captain green hair, on Apr 19 2008, 02:07 PM, said:
But where is my jacuzzi?

See?
Thanks again for the help Captain Green Hair!
Mr. Mandalorian, on Apr 19 2008, 02:24 PM, said:

That's...Nice, cute, cool? The thought of seeing a full sailing ship bobbing through the air...
Anyway, the ship is beautiful. The sails are great, and the hull is very well built.
But...why is Alex mounted on the stern?

Mr. Tiber is an expert fisherman...

Just kidding. I liked the nautical feel of it and thought it made a nice ornamental stern.
Mr. Mandalorian, on Apr 19 2008, 02:24 PM, said:
One critique: I think you should either raise the engines higher or add another pair. It looks like too much wind could push the sails forward, and the whole ship would somersault... I'm no expert on flying ships, but that doesn't sound good!

This is a great point. Shut up.

Of course, I'm joking. This is probably a subject for a smarty like Sinner, but I believe you're right. Not to mention that without a tail rotor it may counter-spin against the current rotors and be impossible to manage anyway...I think
Ugh, I've been replying for too long and I have much work to do, so I shall thank everyone for the excellent feedback and hope I can show you this MOC soon in a fun comic!