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#1 Tim Bit

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 10:39 PM

Welcome to the 99th legion dedicated topic were you can discuss all things 99th.

What is the 99th Legion?
A comic series I created that follows my clone legion the, 99th.

Comic Finder.
A little something to help you catch up.
Chapter 1

Part 1 Bash 'Em Up!

Part II Interuption

Part III Picked-Off

Part IV Jailed

Part V Dead & Gone

List of characters.
Who's out there fighting for the republic or separatists.

Clones:

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Name: 99th legion troopers.
Age: Unkown
Rank: Unkown
Species: Mandolorian male
Weapon: Standard blaster rifle.
Armour: Normal with the exception of an arc antenna
Notables:Bitt
             Giik

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Name: Cc0857
Nickname: Din
Age: Unknown
Rank: Commander
Species: Mandolorian Male
Weapons: Two blaster pistols
Bio: Commander Din was origlanaly a gunner but when his gunship crashed on Geonosis he was forced to the front lines. His performance was so amazing he replaced Commander Siin as Commander of a division of the 99th. He has made good freinds with Ow Kin his jedi genral.

Jedi:

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Name: Ow Kin
Age: 37
Rank: Master
Species: Human Male
Weapon: Blue lightsabre and a tooth filled with poison.
Bio: Discovered at a young age Ow showed promace from the start. At the age of eighteen he broke into the fourth largest smuggling ring in the outer rim and arrested all members. When the clone wars broke out he fought alongside commander siin until siin was shot by a droideka. He now fights alongside Din.

Sepratists:

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Name: Livik Shirley
Age: 62
Rank: Genral
Species: Geonosin Male
Weapon: None
Bio: Born and raised as a soldier Livik showed command potential from a young age. At the age of 48 he took control over the geonsin army. When the geonsins joined the sepratist alliance he was put in command of Battle Droids. He took command of a team of scientists when Merritt joined the sepratists. Livik Shirley is his english name.

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Name: Z5-31
Species: Droid
Weapon: Double sided blue lightsabre and upgraded blaster rifle.
Bio: Created by Livik Shirleys team of scientists on Merritt. The droid was designed for war and assasination.

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Name: Jailer Droid
Species: Speacalized B1 Battle Droid
Weapon: Long shot Tazor
Bio: Designed as a guard for prisoners, the Jailer Droid proved useful at the end of battles. Distinguished by there gray right arm and gray legs.

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Name: Z5-14
Species: Droid
Weapon: Double sided Green lightsabre and upgraded blaster rifle
Bio:  Created by Livik Shirleys team of scientists on Merritt. The droid was designed for war and assasination.

Civilians:

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Name: Merritt Guard
Age: 16-65
Species: Merrittian Male & Female
Weapon: Blaster Rifle and Electro Knife
Bio: The Merritt Guard is the Merrittian police force and army. Used also as guards for democrats.

Democrats:

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Name: Devin Katonia
Age:56
Rank: King of Merritt
Species: Merrittian Male
Weapon: None
Bio: Devin Katonia is the son of the 4th senator of Merritt. As a child he was raised to be the next senator. However when the King's only son died the king chose devin as his heir. When the king died devin was 45. He ammediatley assumed control ove merritt. When the clone wars began he stashed away half of the planets resources in under ground facilatys. When the republic came to collect supplies they took most of the above ground material but not the below. He then made the decission to leave the republic.
I hope you enjoy my comics!


I found my original comic not what I wanted so I'm restarting with a new format!

Edited by Tim Bit, 18 March 2009 - 08:17 PM.

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#2 CommanderCody77

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Posted 02 February 2009 - 11:53 AM

I think its good but you should make the text larger and make it much longer
I am also a big fan of Liverpool FC, Chelsea, QPR (Queens Park Rangers) , and West Bromwich Albion

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#3 Tim Bit

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Posted 02 February 2009 - 04:15 PM

View PostCommanderCody77, on Feb 2 2009, 03:53 AM, said:

I think its good but you should make the text larger and make it much longer

The reason it's so short is because I'm making it weekly.
thanks
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#4 CommanderCody77

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Posted 03 February 2009 - 12:17 PM

View PostTim Bit, on Feb 3 2009, 12:15 AM, said:

The reason it's so short is because I'm making it weekly.
thanks
Oh cool :thumbup:
I am also a big fan of Liverpool FC, Chelsea, QPR (Queens Park Rangers) , and West Bromwich Albion

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#5 pr0visorak

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Posted 03 February 2009 - 02:19 PM

Great job for your 1st try! You might want to take it easy and do it carefully instead of rushing through. It doesnt need to be weekly what matters is the quality! :classic: You might want to not use flash, its a bit harder to see and following CommanderCody77 can you make your textboxes and words a bit bigger please? As it will make the comic look much better! :classic:
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#6 Clonecommando007

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Posted 03 February 2009 - 09:34 PM

If you're using paint, which I think you are, try opening two paint windows.  In the first one, write the text you want to have, then select and copy it, and in the next window, make an appropriate sized text bubble and paste the text.  That's what I do for every single texted frame I've had in any of my 9 published comics... except for the first few frames when I didn't know how to do it right.  

Looks good so far though!

#7 Bob

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Posted 03 February 2009 - 10:31 PM

Nice!

I like how you incorporated the Senate aspect, rather then people running around shooting things.

I look forward to the next segment.

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#8 Tim Bit

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Posted 26 February 2009 - 05:55 AM

As I said I found my first one lacking so here is the real deal!

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Hope you like it.
Comments welcome.
I'll index the characters in the next week so you can get an idea of who they are.
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#9 CommanderCody77

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Posted 26 February 2009 - 08:48 AM

Good just make the pictures bigger and the font and its very good
I am also a big fan of Liverpool FC, Chelsea, QPR (Queens Park Rangers) , and West Bromwich Albion

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#10 pr0visorak

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Posted 27 February 2009 - 09:40 AM

This is definetly an improvement on the previous one! :thumbup:  :classic:
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#11 Tim Bit

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Posted 02 March 2009 - 02:00 AM

Thanks for your well... 2 comments :tongue:
Here is the next comic:
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Questions comments suggestions welcome!
Excpect the next comic by wednesday.
I will index these charaters shortly.
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#12 CommanderCody77

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Posted 02 March 2009 - 11:43 AM

Looks quite short this one though will the next comic be longer and have more action?
I am also a big fan of Liverpool FC, Chelsea, QPR (Queens Park Rangers) , and West Bromwich Albion

Common Sense is not so common
  -François-Marie Aroue

You can do anything, but not everything.
—David Allen

A wise man gets more use from his enemies than a fool from his friends.
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#13 Tim Bit

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Posted 02 March 2009 - 04:32 PM

View PostCommanderCody77, on Mar 2 2009, 03:43 AM, said:

Looks quite short this one though will the next comic be longer and have more action?

Yes it will.
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#14 Tim Bit

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Posted 08 March 2009 - 06:14 PM

Sorry for the delay and the double post.

Now onto the comic:

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The exiting conclusion,

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Hope you liked it.
Part IV may be coming today :wink:
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#15 CommanderCody77

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Posted 08 March 2009 - 11:52 PM

Quite good so far :thumbup: Can't wait to see what happens next
I am also a big fan of Liverpool FC, Chelsea, QPR (Queens Park Rangers) , and West Bromwich Albion

Common Sense is not so common
  -François-Marie Aroue

You can do anything, but not everything.
—David Allen

A wise man gets more use from his enemies than a fool from his friends.
—Baltasar Gracian

#16 Tim Bit

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Posted 09 March 2009 - 04:02 AM

As promised heres the next episode.

Sorry no title page yet...

              Jailed
       Chapter I Part IV

Previously,

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and now the exciting conclusion,

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Sorry for the blurry pics.
Next comic on Wednesday (I hope  :wink: )
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#17 Tim Bit

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Posted 15 March 2009 - 03:11 AM

Sorry for the double post! (again)
And sorry for the delay! (again)

Well here is the next comic:


          Chapter I
            Part V
         Dead & Gone



Previously...
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And now the exciting conclusion...
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Enjoy!
I'm hoping to get the next one up tommorrow.
Again sorry for the delay.
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