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#1 NoIR DsIR

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Posted 19 April 2010 - 12:22 PM

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Hey, I just wanted to show my latest creation the battle for Christophsis! I was inspired by the movie the Clone Wars. So now without many words my moc. It would be great to hear your opion related to this creation! For more pictures click on the link below.

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Edited by KimT, 19 May 2010 - 07:31 PM.

    Peace is a lie; there is only passion.
    Through passion, I gain strength.
    Through strength, I gain power.
    Through power, I gain victory.
    Through victory, my chains are broken.
    The Force shall free me.


    —Darth Bane, Dark Lord of the Sith

#2 Darth Lion

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Posted 19 April 2010 - 12:26 PM

Too bad, the folder is not yet public - caaaan't wait....  :cry_sad:

I will edit my opinion when the pictures are public!

Grüße aus Rheinland-Pfalz  :thumbup:
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edit: Well, nice little fight scene.  :thumbup: But it is actually, IMO, not instantly recognizable. It could be any other planet/battle. I think there are too much figures on too few space.
I like how you made the blasters but the whole "landscape" needs improvements. Don't know how to say, but I could actually built this in 10-15 minutes including planning etc.. no offense!  :wink: Just try to expand this und make it look like a diorama. Then you have got more space and we can take look at all the details - I can only see the figures and some ruins. Nice start but it looks not finished. It would be cool if you could post an image without the figures!  :classic:

Rook, do you mean "want to wait"  :grin: It doesn't make sense at all.^^

Edited by Darth Lion, 19 April 2010 - 05:58 PM.


#3 Rook

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Posted 19 April 2010 - 04:16 PM

Need to resize your images. No one will want to want for 3 minutes while your picture downloads. ;)
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#4 NoIR DsIR

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Posted 19 April 2010 - 06:49 PM

Sorry for that! Pictures have been resized!

@ Darth Lion: I'll take new pictures without the minifigures.
    Peace is a lie; there is only passion.
    Through passion, I gain strength.
    Through strength, I gain power.
    Through power, I gain victory.
    Through victory, my chains are broken.
    The Force shall free me.


    —Darth Bane, Dark Lord of the Sith

#5 The Legonater

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Posted 19 April 2010 - 11:46 PM

Sorrry, I agree with Darth Lion- iot doesn't really look like Christophsis. Mind If I steal your idea for a second to make a more acurate version?

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#6 lightningtiger

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Posted 20 April 2010 - 12:09 AM

Not bad MOC 'NoIR DsIR' - quite a busy battlefield there and by the looks of it the droids are lossing the battle !
Good try with the plamsa bolts firing from the blasters and what is the machine in the background with two clones on it ?
Nice work and keep on bricking ! :sweet:

#7 NoIR DsIR

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Posted 20 April 2010 - 12:21 PM

@ Legonater: No problem, you can take my idea. I hope I can learn a bit, but I have to say this moc was without any concept. I made it just to relax while I was learning.
    Peace is a lie; there is only passion.
    Through passion, I gain strength.
    Through strength, I gain power.
    Through power, I gain victory.
    Through victory, my chains are broken.
    The Force shall free me.


    —Darth Bane, Dark Lord of the Sith

#8 The Legonater

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Posted 20 April 2010 - 06:47 PM

View PostNoIR DsIR, on Apr 20 2010, 07:21 AM, said:

@ Legonater: No problem, you can take my idea. I hope I can learn a bit, but I have to say this moc was without any concept. I made it just to relax while I was learning.


Thanks.

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#9 Walter Kovacs

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Posted 20 April 2010 - 09:54 PM

I'm going to echo what Darth Lion said.  The scene is rather nice, with a lot of good action going on.  It's just very nondescript.  It could be a battle just about anywhere in the galaxy.  

I do like the clone taking a break behind the wall.  Any backstory on why he needed a rest in the middle of a pitched battle?
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