[SONE Ep.I] If only I didn't miss the deadline...

[Legofin2012]

So I built this for Ep.I, just didn't uploaded it on time, but thought i'd post it anyway:

Although I forgot to take pics of the main interior, and again I know it's to late I just wanted to show it anyway.

[Nom Carver]

It's looking good, your help could have made the difference back then.

[Legofin2012]

Thanks, I know, so disappointed when I missed the deadline!

Edited May 1, 2014 by Legofin2012

[BEAVeR]

O, that's a really nice build! It's a shame that you didn't receive any points for your effort. Maybe you can still ask to consider it as a free build? That would also be a perfect excuse to give us the accompanioning story...

But let us talk about the build now we're here. Well, each section has it's charm. The grey area is really nice. It's very typical for Cloud City, and the smoothness, railings and color shades are very nice. The black of the railings is a bit too harsh though. It's nice that the inside has a different color, and that sculpture there is pretty exceptional and very appropriate. The relief bricks are a great touch, but still I think it is a bit empty. Maybe sole real relief in the walls on multiple levels and some piping would do a better job.

I can't say much about the white section since I don't have a full view, but I'm liking what I see. The tan-white combo is very nice. And the window is nice. Rounding off the corners of the door more would be nice. The platform isn't bad at all, and I like that speeder, although it's very reminiscent of Coruscant.

As a final remark, I'm not quite sure about the overall layout of the build with those two entirely different views of CC so right next to each other without any kind of buffer region. Maybe placing them back on back or on top of each other would meke more sense visually. But still, the individual parts are very good on their own and I congratulate you on them. Hope you keep improving for future episodes!

[TWP]

That's a good build! so you did only find out a little bit more then a week ago you missed the deadline for episode I?

[Legofin2012]

Thanks, your comments are always helpful, and I really appreciate them! I would post it as a free build but I thought the rebels had control over it, and I forgot the story :P But if I redid it there would be a lot of things I would change, I had a lot of other pics but I must of deleted them, and thanks again for your comments!

Thanks, no :P I was looking through the pics on my camera and found them, and thought I might as well post them ;)