You have made a funny entry for the Pillage the Village Contest.
I think the line above states a lot.
Funny is good, but not if funny is all it is...after all it is called the Pillage the Village contest
There is no cruelty involved in your nice MOC, so although it looks good (and funny), it is simply said UNSUITABLE for this contest.
I am truely sorry, but I think you don't have a chanche of winning a prize with this.
Do not give up, and try to create something that follows the rules, both the written rules as the silent rules ! (If you get what I mean...)
1) It has little purpose trying to bring improvements to something that is basically wrong.
Therefore I will post none but these(yet!):
FIRST: READ the rules and the threads that comes with it very carefully.
SECOND: change the "base" (not baseplate, your background is OK BTW) of your MOC, bring in cruelty and apply the other rules and hints.
THEN: repost another MOC in this thread, and I will do my very best to give you suggestions to make it better (if that would be possible
)and, as I am certain, so will the others.
2) You could go with bringing in small improvements like Guss and Erdbeereis suggested, but I warn against it. Even with these and possibly other improvements, I do not think you can win THIS
contest with it. But it is YOUR MOC, not mine...I only make humble suggestions.
I do not want to be harsh or negative, I only want to give you a helping hand because I think you haven't read the introductionary threads as you should have.
I can clearly see you have the skills that are required to make a winning entry, I wish you the best of luck !
(Boy, this was hard for me...)
Edited by zorro3999, 06 October 2008 - 08:42 PM.