Skinny Boy Posted June 26, 2009 "Man I am sick of this crap." "Oh yeah, whats that?" "Workin' as guards for some treasure hunter who ain't got the slightest idea where he's goin'." "Relax gentlemen. We'll be there soon." "Ah! Here we are." "Wha'? This doesn't look like any cave I've ever seen." "Yeah, whats the deal?" "Gentlemen. I am afraid there is no treasure." "Then why are we here. What are we doing?" "You are now a part of an Experiment. Number 14 to be exact. This is to help prepare future generations for a disaster that is going to happen within the century." "Errr, do we still get paid?" "Oh my yes. Double, in fact. But only if you survive." "Survive!? Survive what? What are you talking about?" "I'm afraid I cannot say. No information can be given, only some reccomendations. 1, Do not, I repeat: Do not return to the boat. It has been shipwrecked, and is also now the most dangerous place on the island. 2, There is a cave, that was not a lie. We suggest you either stay right here, or head to the cave. Though we can't reveal where it is." "And now I must leave." "Wha', why can't we leave? How are you gonna get outta here?" "Trust me gentlemen, you do not want to leave in the same way I am." "Whoah!" "Oh shi"!" "What-the-hell!" "What in God's name is going on here..." To Be Continued. Just to be clear, the voice with standard black text is the man in Tan with the brown Fedora, since there really is no tan text, and it is the backdrop of this forum. Thanks for looking! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cole Posted June 26, 2009 It's fairly simple, but I supose it's only an introduction so far. The story seems good, I look forward to seeing the rest. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xenologer Posted June 27, 2009 I love the way you used clear plates to make the stream of water on the floor. It looks great. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Yloquen Posted June 27, 2009 Looks interesting :) Let's see what's going to happen ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dwarfinator Posted June 27, 2009 Very interesting... when will the next one be up? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Skinny Boy Posted June 27, 2009 "Hey, c'mere a minute." "What?" "Whattayou think that... wait, was he even human?" "I dunno. What were you sayin'?" "Ehh, what do you think he meant by surviving." "Heck, I have no idea. But man am I gettin' hungy." "Same here. We better rest for a while." "1...2...3... Hey, wheres Jeff?" "MMMMAHHH GOD GET IT OFF ME! HELMMMMM" "What-the, Jeff!?" "Jeff?" "Holy Shi-!" "What the hell!" "Christ! I'm outta here!" To be continued. Thanks for looking, and thanks for the comments so far. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Skinny Boy Posted July 1, 2009 "Hey man, get back here! The guy said to stay here Goddamnit!" "Oh man, what the hell was that! Poor Jeff, damn that stupid treasure hunter." "Whoah." "How in the hell did the boat get here?... ...and why is the cargo bay open?! Oh man, somethin's messed up... ...huhh, I'll just wait here for the others." "Alright, we gotta get to that cave. Clearly this place ain't safe." "Yeah, but we're gonna have to go through, the trees." To be continued. Thanks for looking! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TeddiGramz Posted July 3, 2009 Ooh, mysterious. Great lighting on the 2nd and 3rd! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BlueBard Posted July 5, 2009 I've just discovered it and I must say this comic of yours is going better and better Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Newland Posted July 27, 2009 Wow, just wow. this comic is very good. I like the whole mysteriousness effect you have going. Can't wait for the next part :: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
doctordark Posted August 6, 2009 That was really good I like how you have different colored words for different colored people. Can't wait for the next one. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nintha Posted August 6, 2009 This seems like it is going to be great can't wait for more of the story. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saberwing Posted August 21, 2009 Great story! Mystery and LEGO combined.... I hope it will continue. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
prof1515 Posted August 21, 2009 This would seem to belong here. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
