KielDaMan, on 26 March 2011 - 05:17 AM, said:
Very interesting take on the N-1 Naboo Starfighter DC
! I love your SNOT approach on this build, your goal of getting the signature smooth finish of this starfighter is quite successful. I also love the gap in the front for the blasters.
The initial criticism I could offer is the body seems to be too straight, I think replacing the 2x2 slopes at the sides with 3x2s or 3x4s will approximate more the wider side sloping part of the ship.
Thanks very much KDM! Right now, my yellow supply is very sly. I will likely do a BL order to execute those curves, and angles better.
Brickdoctor, on 26 March 2011 - 05:20 AM, said:
I agree. I also think that the engines could be longer with more yellow, and that the cockpit should be moved a little forwards and the tail extended.
As I said to KDM-I wish I had a Lot more yellow. By the time I'd reached building the back I only had that 1x8 tile left
Delta 38, on 26 March 2011 - 05:22 AM, said:
Nice! The main body area seems a little too thin, though. Otherwise, it's quite good.
Personally, I prefer the thinner version, but that's just me.
xecom, on 26 March 2011 - 05:25 AM, said:
thats a really great work! i just love it
fallenangel309, on 26 March 2011 - 07:02 AM, said:
Thanks for those fallen I'll take them into mind on V2!
Blackknight112, on 26 March 2011 - 09:23 AM, said:
Great moc dobbyclone, I also agree that the main body need an other angle.
and you are making a lot of mocs in a short time Is youre goal to make one MOC a week?
Keep up the good work
Well, This was the result of roughly 2 hours of work today. I actually have 2 more done and ready
An OT and a PT.
Mr Man, on 26 March 2011 - 12:31 PM, said:
Arrg I see 12 studs fail
No Its not DobbyClone its great, however the sloping should extend from the end of the wings to the end of the cockpit, you have them stopping at the start of the cockpit. Great job though.
(Needs More Chrome ).
Edit:I think the sloping needs to be a bit wider though. (Much better than TLG's 4 attempts, you'd think that after 4 they might have had it
I was angry about those
lightningtiger, on 26 March 2011 - 01:39 PM, said:
Great work so far 'DC', but I feel the main body of the fighter too thin towards the front, plus the engines need a little work like the good doctor has already said.
The SNOT wings are excellent and give this craft some nice clean lines.....it just needs beefing up a little !
Brick On !
Edited by DobbyClone, 26 March 2011 - 03:25 PM.