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Astromech Workplace Contest: Smuggler's Ship


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#1 LEGOman273

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Posted 15 June 2012 - 10:03 PM

My entry:

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Posted 16 June 2012 - 01:36 AM

One thing you might consider doing is adding a description to your MOC so that people know exactly what it is. It is often easier to appreciate a MOC when you know the story behind it.

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#3 LEGOman273

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Posted 16 June 2012 - 04:34 AM

View PostErdbeereis, on 16 June 2012 - 01:36 AM, said:

One thing you might consider doing is adding a description to your MOC so that people know exactly what it is. It is often easier to appreciate a MOC when you know the story behind it.
There is not really a backstory, but I can write a bit more on the setting.

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Posted 16 June 2012 - 05:16 AM

Great work LEGOman!
I really like the design of the walls, looks very neat  :wink:
And those studs on top? Is there a second part to this?
Good luck in the contest  :sweet:

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#5 LEGOman273

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Posted 16 June 2012 - 01:57 PM

View PostLord Of The Fries, on 16 June 2012 - 05:16 AM, said:

Great work LEGOman!
I really like the design of the walls, looks very neat  :wink:
And those studs on top? Is there a second part to this?
Good luck in the contest  :sweet:
Thank you.
It is based off the Falcon.
I haven't decided yet. It depends on if I can think of something good.
Thank you.

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Posted 16 June 2012 - 08:37 PM

Really liking the look of this one! Good luck to you! Posted Image
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Posted 24 June 2012 - 03:28 PM

This is one of the best entries so far! I like the overall look of it a lot, and the dark red is an excellent complimentary colour. Your entry gives a dark, "smugglers-in-a-rush-so-nobody-discovers-them" feel, and that's really awesome. A bit more of a story, and this would be perfect!

EDIT: I forgot to add, I love the tiling on the floor and wall, and the use of those cheese slopes.

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Posted 24 June 2012 - 04:11 PM

View Postpurpleparadox, on 24 June 2012 - 03:28 PM, said:

This is one of the best entries so far! I like the overall look of it a lot, and the dark red is an excellent complimentary colour. Your entry gives a dark, "smugglers-in-a-rush-so-nobody-discovers-them" feel, and that's really awesome. A bit more of a story, and this would be perfect!

EDIT: I forgot to add, I love the tiling on the floor and wall, and the use of those cheese slopes.
Thank you. :classic:

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Posted 24 June 2012 - 08:50 PM

This is great as is, but perhaps change the lighting? Some of the details are a little hard to make out.

#10 LEGOman273

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Posted 24 June 2012 - 10:47 PM

View PostVMLN8R, on 24 June 2012 - 08:50 PM, said:

This is great as is, but perhaps change the lighting? Some of the details are a little hard to make out.
I will see what I can do.




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