The Star Wars Comic Game-Season One

[JimBee]

Yes, please, no more lightsabers....

Also, I'd like tro make an announcement. As of today, our member Oky Wan Kenobi has been named co-leader of the SW Comic Game. He has shown great loyalty for this game, and has helped out a lot. He also has proven that he can handle the responsibility. Thanks, buddy!

[BPac21]

Okay, how about the guy riding the Kaadu (kaadu not required) It's a 1x1 hand plate, 2 green 1x1 buttons, a pair of binoculars, a BD torso, SBD legs, 2 Exo-Force arms, and agents pistols or EF Robot hands. Also, the arms, body, and hands can be any color.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/BPac21/B...et/dsc01698.jpg

Alright, backstory time.

Name- 8P4C

Species- A sangheili robot.

8P4C was created on Sangheilios, and was employed by the sangheili in the Battle of Substance.However, he was almost destroyed by Darth Draak. He was later repaired by N'Lon Quarn(the green dude you all seem to hate) on the Sunset and later placed in the 956th by Quarn. He, as a side effect of the ''operation'' can change colors at random and has the power of intangibility.

Hello? Is this character OK?

[Oky]

Also, I'd like tro make an announcement. As of today, our member Oky Wan Kenobi has been named co-leader of the SW Comic Game. He has shown great loyalty for this game, and has helped out a lot. He also has proven that he can handle the responsibility. Thanks, buddy!

Yeah, that's right, suckers! Now you have to do whatever I say! MUHAHAHA!

Nah, don't worry, Jim, I wont abuse my powers.

[Adam]

Congratz, Oky! I'm sorry for the delay of my post, my camera battery died. I just finished charging, so the pics should be up soon...

[Oky]

Hello? Is this character OK?

Don't make posts like that. That's kinda rude. If people want to respond to your posts, they will.

Aside from that, I didn't know you were waiting for approval. So, since nobody seems to object, I'll use my newly earned, special co-leader powers to officially approve this character design. I think most of us will be able to recreate something at least similar.

Personally, I am glad to have a droid character on the cast! I was playing with the idea of being a droid when I was designing my character myself. And I like your name (or should I say model type? ) a lot too. BPac = 8P4C. LOL. But maybe you should add a dash in there to make it more StarWars-ish. How about "8P-4C" or "8-P4C"? Idk, just a suggestion.

Edited October 28, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[BPac21]

Don't make posts like that. That's kinda rude. If people want to respond to your posts, they will.

Aside from that, I didn't know you were waiting for approval. Since nobody seems to object, I'll use my newly earned, special co-leader powers to officially approve this character design.

Personally, I am glad to have a droid character on the cast! I was playing with the idea of being a droid when I was designing my character myself. And I like your name (or should I say model type? ) a lot too. BPac = 8P4C. LOL. But maybe you should add a dash in there to make it more StarWars-ish. How about "8P-4C" or "8-P4C"? Idk, just a suggestion.

That's Good. Oh, and by the way, there are some Halo refrences in that backstory.

[JimBee]

BPac, your character is okay now, thanks for changing him. You won't be on the banner (since it's already made), but I'll add you (as well as anyone else that I forgot to add) to the list.

[Da Death Star!]

We said no more lightsaber wielders, dammit!

M'kay,and congrats on your co-leadership! .Oh,BPac,I'll be able to make that fig.(Thanks for redesigning,I really appreciate it ).To the Edit button !*Insert Batman theme here *

EDIT:Changed to a key(Couldn't think of anything else) .

Edited October 28, 2008 by Da Death Star!

[Adam]

Ta da! NEW with LIGHTSABER effects! I've used this replacement Adam while I try and find my torso...

A piece of wreckage flew through the dimming sky...

... and crashed right into the escape pod, causing it to explode, throwing Adam forwards.

He was blasted off his feet and crashed into a clump of foliage.

He shook his head.

"Well, I've suffered worse..." Adam was right. The pod was very small and didn't cause much of a blast, and he had been a good amount away from it when it was hit. He sat up and took stock of the situation.

"Meh... *cough*" Although leaves can soften your fall, they also have a tendency of going into your mouth. He got up and started to walk.

He held his lightsaber out but didn't ignite it- if he did, it'd be like screaming to the seperatists of his position, for no doubt they were monitoring this kind of thing...

Adam wasn't quite sure of which direction to walk in- everything on Felucia's surface looked the same but different- there was no specific area that was unique. He flipped out his tracker and noted the substance trailing to his right. He went in that direction. He had gone quite a bit by now, and Adam forgot to check where he was stepping.

Out of nowhere, a giant claw snatched Adam and clenched him tightly, attempting to break every bone in his body.

As reluctant as Adam was to use his lightsaber... he had to. He whipped it out and slashed at the vile beast that held him, ripping the claw to shreds.

What remained of the claw shot back under the foliage, and caused a rumble beneath Adam's feet. He collapsed into the leaves behind him, unable to remain sturdy on the soft, uneven greens.

He crashed down beneath the foliage, and before he could get up, more plants had collapsed on top of him.

Adam sighed and rested their for a moment. Since he wasn't crinkling leaves with his feet, he could hear every sound on the surface- the twitter of Felucian birds, the growls of predators awaiting the approaching night, the soft krackle of a radio.... soft krackle of a radio?! Adam froze. In the darkness kept by a group of trees to his left, a lightsaber turned on.

pr0visorak, you're turn- is that you in the trees?

Edited October 28, 2008 by Adam

[simonjedi]

I don't have a saber, I stole bequins, then dropped it.

Simonjedi.What phase armor are your clones?

Phase 1 but because we'll need 6 + pilot i'm fine with people using phase 2 clones.

EDIT: Now with added story:

It was the morning, when the group set of again. Everyone was rested and ready to continue their objective, The Space battle in the sky continued, with no signs of stopping.

Thire stopped suddenly and crouched down, hand up to tell the group to stop. He then gave a signal that Loken was dreading...

Droid Patrol

Edited October 29, 2008 by simonjedi

[pr0visorak]

Hours before the incident...

"Yes R3! We finally reached the felucia planet, wait... what the?!? Fierfrek!

pr0 found himself in the middle of a large battle. He manuvered his way through the fight...But suddenly

Boom!

"Damn! Lokks like we are going down! R3 charge all energy to main shields and bottom thrusters immediatly!"

However, before R3 could answer...Pzzt...

*Droid Screaming noise*

"I am so going to get a new droid when I get back!"

pr0 manually put all power to bottom thrusters to reduce falling speed and their shields. As the ship went down, fire appeared at the bottom of the ship and started to heat it up. pr0 braced himself for impact and tried to reduce the falling speed with the force. The ship had entered the atmosphere and soon crashed.

Boom!Cash! Bam!

"What happened?"

pr0 got up on ih feet and surveyed the crash site.

"There it is! My helmet!"

"Now to look for my supplies and pack them all up."

"Done! Better start moving before those clankers get here!"

After walking for a long time, he finally stopped at a big bush.

He felt the force. But it was not something or somewhere, it was someone! He grabbed his lightsaber and prepared himself for battle. Suddenly, a stranger appeared and let out a battle cry before fighting him with a lightsaber, The duel was on.

pr0 jumped above the stranger and knocked the strangers lightsaber out of his hand and onto the floor.

After jumping above the stranger he used the force to throw his lightsaber at him. But the stranger managed to dodge by a split second.

The stranger grabbed his lightsaber and jumped towards pr0 to attack him.

pr0 used the force and grabbed the stranger's lightsaber and blocked the stranger's attack.

They knocked their lightsaber's out of each of their hands but the stranger was fast to respond when he pushed pr0 on to the floor.

"Remove your helmet now and reveal yourself."

pr0 did as instructed.

"You look like one of general kota's men. A commando eh? What does a commando like you know about the force?"

"I know enough..."

"Tell me all about it, come on pick up your lightsaber and lets go."

"Right, lets go. It all began when..."

The two of them walked away from the site and to the rendevue point to meet up with the other soldiers.

[simonjedi]

What backpack is that?

As Will Pulled his vibrosword out of damaged battle droid chest, he looked over to Garviel, who looked nervous. "They're going to notice the droids are missing. We better get going or else we'll be overrun."

Half an hour later.. Loken, Will and the clones reached the outpost, "Hold on a minute, thats a comm station" Zak said, "We can finally get re-enforcements and maybe some armour."

Sergeant Alpha explained the plan, we were to assault the position, destroy the communication jammer and reprogram the transmitter to get a message out to Jim, Adam, or Oky if they were still alive anyway.

The attack went flawlessly, with only lieutenant echo being wounded. The jammer is now currently a smouldering ruin thanks to Glands demolitions experiance.

"SERGEANT" Garviel ran over towards Alpha. "Get your men to secure the building while we transmit the message. Will come with me."

Will successfully reprogrammed the transmitter and transmitted the message "This is Garviel Loken with William Jones to all Republic channels, We are currently defending a captured separatist outpost. Request re-enforcements" every 30 seconds like Loken asked.

Loken on the other hand had gone down to the central computer of the base to look for information.

[pr0visorak]

Thats an official lego backpack! I got when I bought one of the Jhonny Thunder sets.

"...thats the story."

"Wow! So you were trained by master yoda and Kota. It must have been an honor."

"It was okay, I still prefer to use a bit of the dark side on my own."

"So you discovered the lightning and choke by yourself, fascinating. Be sure not to use it to often though. Or I will kill you."

"Ya. Agreed. I only use it for extreme measures. But I am not a fan of lightsaber tatics though."

"I could see that when you were battling against me."

"Right. I mean why should you use a lightsaber when you can use the force to block out all the laser bullets."

"Its easier and not many jedi are as strong as you in the force."

"Ya, but...wait...I am picking up a message."

"What is it?"

"There is a droid outpost nearby. They are requesting for reinforcements."

"Do you want to call in your fleet."

"I think I will wait for when it feels right."

"Whatever, its your fleet after all."

"Ya, I did not get your name by the way jedi."

"My name is Adam."

"Mine is Joshua but you can call me pr0."

"You must have earned that name obviously."

"No kidding"

"Looks like you have another story to tell again."

"No duh, it began when..."

Our two jedis made their way to the droid outpost.

Back at the other system that pr0 came from

"...that is the message left for you by pr0 master yoda"

"Commander very well, very well. Come my fleet will. Be with you the force may."

Thank you master yoda. Commander out. It looks like we have a big fleet heading towards us. Any news from pr0?"

"No commander. But we are picking up distress signals from the planet on where he is. Do we repond or not sir?"

"Get the troops into position and get them into their ships first. Make them stay there and wait for my signal. Obey your oders imeediatly and make sure the ship is prepared for a hyperspace jump."

"We are going to assist them sir?"

"No, but get ready for engagement because once the signal from pr0 appears. We go immediately, tell that too to the ships that are coming in from master yoda."

"Thats going to be a lot of ships, this is going to be a big fight."

"Trooper, you have no idea."

[Oky]

Nice pics everyone! Keep it up!

The entire Venator was shaking under the fire of enemy turbo lasers, now that the blasts were hitting the hull directly. Inside, it was a complete chaos: Clones were running up and down the corridors, an alarm noise was in the air, and here and there, some electric circuits sparked. Oky Wan stumbled around, not sure where he was going and unable to think due to all the racket. Then, all of a sudden he could see Jim coming his way. With him were Thok and a clone who looked like he was the head engineer of the ship. "Jim, what's going on?" asked Oky Wan. "I got good news and bad news" said Jim. "The bad news is that our shields are down for good and the ship is taking heavy damage! I fear we have to evacuate." "Great!" said Oky sarcastically, "Well, what's the good news?" "Our communications are back! Looks like Garviel's mission was successful! Also, some more Republic ships have come to our help. I just got off the comlink with one of the ships' authorities, Commander Bob. He says he and his men will cover us while we go down to the planet." "Excellent!" said Oky Wan. "Then it's time for us to execute our part of the plan and destroy that ratchet time machine!" "Exactly!" agreed Jim and turned to the head engineer: "Try to keep the ship together until everyone has evacuated!" "Yes, Sir!" said the clone and ran off. "C'mon, Thok, let's go!"

The three of them hurried toward the hangar. On the way, Oky Wan told the other two about his theory of Adam being behind the comlink-sabotage. "That son of a bantha!" cursed Jim. "After this, I'll need to have a serious talk with him - again!"

They had reached the hangar and were now getting into an ARC 170 Starfighter. Oky sat in the pilot seat up front while Jim took the position of copilot and Thok that of the gunner. "What about Wouwie?" asked Oky Wan. "He is leading the troops into battle" replied Thok. And so, they took off, left the hangar, and headed for the planet, unknowing what dangers were awaiting them...

I just assumed that you are a commander, Bob, since you are leading troops into battle, side-by-side with a Jedi, and all. Hope that's right.

Edited October 31, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[Bob]

I have my own Republic Ship (Venanator?) at my control. So yes, I suppose I am a Commander.

"Gunner, open fire on that Banking Clan Frigate" Bob said.

"Yes Sir" The Private said.

The frigate started to go down with the combined fire of the ship. There was some cheering from the deck.

"Good, Now I have an assignment for you. Some survivors are leaving that damaged ship over there. Make sure they make it down".

"Yes sir"

"Lieutenant, ready my gunship. I'm heading down there with my squad after they make it down."

"Yes Sir".

"Is that all you clones say?"

"Yes Sir!" All the clones sounded off.

"Arggg...Just get it done"

Bob started to make his way to where he had his special gunship. There he would wait for his clones to get the message.

Next comes pics...

Edited October 31, 2008 by Bob the Construction Man

[Wouwie]

Do you mind that I decide when my ship goes down? Cause I won't be able to be online as much as I want..By the way, next post from will hopefully contain pics

Edited October 31, 2008 by wouwie13

[simonjedi]

In the central computer, there was few bits of information that Garviel could use to help the republic, however there was a coded message from Count Dooku to Beqin. As the message began to download, his comlink began to bleep.

"Alpha, whats the matter?"

"Sir, there are two people here, one of them says he knows you, someone called Adam"

Loken smiled. At least someone survived, Adam was skilled and would be a great help to him in stopping the seperatists "I'll be right up sergeant, just finishing off here" and switched his comlink off.

The message from Dooku appeared, the count appeared life sized on the holographic viewer.

"Beqin" his booming voice began "I must express disappointment in your skills, i feel Grevious has greatly exaggerated them. You have continued to be unable to stop, let alone slow several republic agents. May i remind you that these are not jedi or highly trained Clone Commandos, but are civilians. Yet they continue to escape from your grasp, inflicting sever losses on our forces, including 2 starships, several bases and numerous droids. You have one more chance Bequin. If you fail, i'm afraid the consequence of your failure, will be most dire."

The message flickered off and Garviel look on in shock. He then realised he was to meet Adam, he turned and left.

[JimBee]

"So, do we meet up with Garviel?" asked Thok through the comm link.

"Yes, then we advance to the base. We take up a safe position overlooking it, then we call in an air strike. If it doesn't completely destroy the base, we sneak in, blowing up anything with teeth bigger than it's head or an AI chip smaller than a midichlorian" explained Butcher. "Then plant a little surprise for them, evacuate, and blow up the base along with the time machine. With luck, General Grievous will be there and die, and we can end the clone wars that much quicker. It turns out this little incident is in the Republic's favor."

"Hopefully ours too..." mumbled Oky Wan.

"I also packed a little something in the cargo hold, just in case" said Jim.

***

After landing safely near the base (the cloaking device was on), the group of three hopped out of the ARC. The Gunship fleet would be arriving as soon as a flare was sent up, since there was no signal on the ship fighting above.

"So, Jim, what was that 'little something' you were talking about?" asked Oky Wan.

"Oh, you'll see soon enough..." came the reply.

Pics soon!

[pr0visorak]

"Okay Adam, I am officially tired of telling stories. Its your turn."

"Nah, I got not much to tell."

"Just say it man I have been talking so much that I think my saliva just ran out."

"Fine pr0. It all started when...Oh look! The outpost!"

"Yes! Saved by the bell! I never thought I would be so glad to see a droid outpost. Too bad pr0!"

"Adam? You said something?"

"Huh? Oh its nothing."

"Remember Adam you promised not to tell anyone about my force powers. If anyone finds out I am so gonna kill you."

"Lets see you try."

pr0 and Adam walked to the outpost, Adam took out his lightsaber while pr0 hid his and took out his duel blasters. They surveyed the area only to find some droid remains.

"Well pr0, it looks like everyone is dead. Lets go look sround for another place."

"No look at the markings in the soil. The dead droids were dragged and removed from their places. I also feel another force presence here. Keep on walking."

"I have a really bad feeling about this..."

Suddenly loaded guns appeared and aimers started pointing at pr0 and Adam. Adam activated his lightsaber while pr0 got ready to run for cover. Than, a clone trooper appeared.

"Halt! Put your weapons down on the ground and stay there. Dont try to do anything funny or we will shoot you."

Adam and pr0 were reluctant too.

"This is general Adam, I demand you stand down!"

"No can do sir! We have strict orders from general Garviel to detain or eliminate all threats to this facility."

"General garviel you say? Tell him its Ganeral Adam and tell him to come down to make sure its us.'

The clone trooper thought for a while and spoke on his comlink.

"You sure you know this general Adam or are you playing a trick?"

"I know him pr0, relax."

The clone trooper walked away from them slowly, maing sure not to turn his back on them before a door from the outpost opeed and a jedi appeared.

'Men!Stand down! This is general Adam and his fellow jedi!"

The clones put down their weapons and continued to remove the droids. pr0 was relieved that they were their allies. But suddenly he remembered something that the geneal had said. fellow jedi He hid his force prescenece quickly and Adam felt it immedialy and realised it too.

"You are a jedi right soldier?"

"No general, the name is pr0."

"Ahhh, one of kota's man. Splendid, I have heard of you but never saw you in person. Its a pleasure to meet you!"

"Adam? Is there someone else with you?"

"No! Why do you ask?"

"I felt someone strong in the force. I recognised your force sensitivity but I had sensed someone far stronger in the force."

"Its propably the planet, after all the force is everywhere!"

"Yes pr0. Maybe..."

"Ya, so general what is the situation?"

"well, pr0 we have called for backup and we are still calling for it. It might take a while but we hope that it will arrive."

"Right, I see one of your man is doing that for you."

"Yes pr0,Will is doing that for me and will continue too untill we get some backup."

"Right than pr0 you can call in your ships!"

"pr0! You have ships that is excellent! Adam you should have told me earlier!"

"I cant call them yet, I will do it when the time is right."

"Men are dying every minute, we can stop this if you call your ship."

"No! Something is just not right to me, its a feeling."

"I understand, but that sounds like a jedi to me."

"Yeah..."

[Oky]

Since when is everyone a general? Did we all get promoted for our services on Utapau and Hoth or something? And even if so, wouldn't the clones call you by your last names?

Also, how can hide your force sensitivity? Like Palpatine always does?

I'm sorry, but all of that doesn't make much sense to me.

As Jim, Oky Wan, and Thok walked toward the rendezvous point, they discussed their situation. At one point, Oky said: "Jim, about what you said back in the starfighter... Do you really think Grievous is still alive? I mean, he was on that separatist cruiser when we planted the bomb and we watched it crash into Hoth. He couldn't have escaped since his starfighter was in the hangar which... you know... Mack blew up." "Yes," said Jim grimly, "I am convinced that he escaped somehow. I have heard stories about him. They say that he can wield over four lightsabers at a time with immense speed and precision. They say he killed several Jedi this way. Now that I have fought him myself, I'm sure these stories are true. And someone who is capable of these things can probably escape a situation like that too. Perhaps he fled the ship right before Mack's heroic act, when we were on our way to our capital ship. Either way, I'm sure he is here. Now that we are getting closer to the base, I think I can even feel his presence." "Hey, guys," interupted Thok, "I think I can already see the CIS outpost where Garviel should be waiting for us!"

Time to reunite!

[Bob]

Trooper on a Loudspeaker: All pilots to your fighters, all gunners to your stations.

Clone Officer: "Sir, we took down another frigate. We should be done up here soon"

Bob: "Did you ready my gunship?"

Clone: "Yes Sir, its in the hanger now with a squad."

Bob: "All troopers, we depart soon. Get Ready"

Al the Jedi: "Ill provide cover support and meet you down there"

Bob: "Close those doors and lets get out of here"

Officer: "Good luck sir!"

The doors shut, and the gunship enters space, Not before long, a droid starfighter comes up

Al: "Im hit!"

Bob: "Stay in there Al, were almost there"

Pilot: "Readying rear cannon"

BOOM!

Bob: "Lets get down to Felucia, im sure there awaiting reinforcements."

The squad and jedi general headed down to the planet as the space battle started to come to an end.

[simonjedi]

Since when is everyone a general? Did we all get promoted for our services on Utapau and Hoth or something?

No, i think its more of a term of respect than anything military

Edited November 1, 2008 by simonjedi

[pr0visorak]

No, i think its more of a term of respect than anything military

Sorry! I thought that you were a general so I called you that but you are one arent't you Simon? can someone give me a list on who is a general and who isn't! Yes, in military and for respect soldiers or clones do call their superiors by their last name unleass the jedi allows to call them by their first name. This is similar to how Rec calls Anakin. He would say "Commander Skywalker" and Cody will say "General Kenobi". Oh yeah, I told you I like to try out stuff by myself sometimes. So one of the stuff I can do is hide myself from the force. We are getting reunited! Hurrah!

[simonjedi]

Sorry! I thought that you were a general so I called you that but you are one arent't you Simon? can someone give me a list on who is a general and who isn't! Yes, in military and for respect soldiers or clones do call their superiors by their last name unleass the jedi allows to call them by their first name. This is similar to how Rec calls Anakin. He would say "Commander Skywalker" and Cody will say "General Kenobi". Oh yeah, I told you I like to try out stuff by myself sometimes. So one of the stuff I can do is hide myself from the force. We are getting reunited! Hurrah!

I'm not a general, just a commander of my little group of clones, by accident actually, you don't have to change your post though, it doesn't bother me

[-JD-]

Will we all meet up soon? Just so we get everyone introduced.

As JD returned from his 'mission' (which contents will be revealed later) he saw a droid outpost. Smoke was rising from the front. Help atlast So he zoomed toward it.

In the base....

Clone: Sir. Un-identified scout closing.

I will be off for a while (school) . Just keep me in the story. I'll be back soon. I'll add posts every now and then. Sorry for any inconvenience