Dr. Steve Posted November 30, 2009 (edited) 103d My 3 Entry's for the PTV II tell a story. The 1st (small entry) Captain Brick Beard falls in Love with the Governors Daughter and the War Ends The 2nd (medium entry) The Wedding Link The 3rd (large division) The Honeymoon Link Captain Brick Beard has fallen in Love with the Governors Daughter and has asked for her hand in marriage. They Agree and the war has ended. Thanks to Theotters and Badboy for your suggestions and the kick in the pants to finish this Edited December 2, 2009 by SlyOwl Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
badboytje88 Posted November 30, 2009 I find this MOC a little bit boring. The medium MOC was very nice, this one is just a tiled baseplate with three minifigs on it. Maybe you could pose brickbeard as if he was kneeling to ask the governors daughter to marry him. You could put a trans clear gem in his hand to represent the ring. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Steve Posted November 30, 2009 I find this MOC a little bit boring. The medium MOC was very nice, this one is just a tiled baseplate with three minifigs on it. Maybe you could pose brickbeard as if he was kneeling to ask the governors daughter to marry him. You could put a trans clear gem in his hand to represent the ring. Thats a greta Idea (he only has one knee...LOL) Just ran out of time. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MetroiD Posted November 30, 2009 I guess this works fine as an intro /first part to your story, but I still think you could have added some scenery to the MOC - it could have been situated in a room or hall of sorts... and then it would have been a perfectly fine Small division entry - after all, why enter it if it won't be subject to voting? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Steve Posted November 30, 2009 (edited) I guess this works fine as an intro /first part to your story, but I still think you could have added some scenery to the MOC - it could have been situated in a room or hall of sorts... and then it would have been a perfectly fine Small division entry - after all, why enter it if it won't be subject to voting? Just to set the story (i thought I would have time to make it and I did not) Looks like a have a few parts here at my office.....I will post a new pic ASAP NEW PIC IS UP. Thanks for the Help Edited November 30, 2009 by Dr. Steve Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MetroiD Posted December 1, 2009 NEW PIC IS UP. Thanks for the Help Bart's piece of advice really proved useful here. The window in the background sort of makes this look as if it were taking place in a Captain's Cabin, so I guess it's quite a bit more believable now. If you'd had some more time left, I would have totally spurred you on to check out the Captain's Cabin contest and use some inspiration for a little piece of appropriate furniture here, but... given the time you had for this entry, it is still a very nice improvement :) Good luck mate! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Meggie1 Posted December 14, 2009 I Love the Govonors Daughter. It made me cry!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
