MOC: Electrix

[optimus99]

electrix is a hero that had some malfunctions when built. Right after being built He attacked MR.Makuhero. other heroes tryed to stop him but he was to powerful. He has not been seen since the accident.

Edited May 2, 2012 by optimus99

[DarkSurgeXL]

Is it a revamp? Even if it's not it's a great MOC i wanna say!

[xxlrocka]

Can I use this character in a story?

[optimus99]

Is it a revamp? Even if it's not it's a great MOC i wanna say!

No it is not a revamp and I'm glad that you like it.

Can I use this character in a story?

I Don't mind as long as you give me credit. what kind of story is it?

[xxlrocka]

I Don't mind as long as you give me credit. what kind of story is it?

It's an adventure story.

[optimus99]

could I see it when your done?

[xxlrocka]

could I see it when your done?

Yeah.

Edit:I've just done the bit where I introduce your character. I also gave credit to you and given a link to this page. You can check out how much I've done here:

http://customherofactory.wikia.com/wiki/Battlefield

Edited May 3, 2012 by xxlrocka

[optimus99]

Yeah.

Edit:I've just done the bit where I introduce your character. I also gave credit to you and given a link to this page. You can check out how much I've done here:

http://customherofactory.wikia.com/wiki/Battlefield

I like your story, can't wait for the next part.

[Takua Nui]

Whereas I like the background, and this looks much better than the official Surge 'Breakout' figure, I personally think this should just be a Surge revamp, with a different MOC as Electrix. But aside from that, good work on the MOC.