Kahgarak

Hold Your Breath

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Here you can see a quick test movie from my stop motion ''Hold your breath''.

I'd like some comments about the giant Polyp Squid i made.Unlike the baby Squids,who suck life energy out,this big momma simply eats you.

Note the Morak firing an Air bubble at the Squid.

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Constructive Critique:

While the animation seemed smooth enough for most of it, I suggest more frames during the action sequences. Honestly, the giant squid attack happened so fast that I had to watch it about 5 times to clearly understand what happened. Lastly, I'd make the text bigger and put it in its own box below the rest of the animation :)

Lookin' good, man!

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Slow. It. Down. This MUST be done. I can't make head nor tails of what's happening and I can't read the text quick enough! I'm not The Flash! It's especially hard for dyspraxic/dyslexic people who can't read very fast, although I doubt even a normal person could.

Seriously. Slow it down.

Seriously, though.

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I think that my next stop motion will be made tomorrow or the day after that.

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