Capt. Stabbin

ToR III Entry Round 1 - Islander feast

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Here is my entry for round 1, hope you like it. I'm keeping with the Redcoat cannibal theme. This is also the first comic I have ever made, so it is still a learning process for me. ENJOY!

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Thanks for looking!

C&C Appreciated!

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Even though it's your first comic, it's pretty good. Although, I believe you forgot the bit where you cut off the reproductive organs on the blues...oh wait, there's nothing to cut off there. Oh well, it's great!

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Great comic! I see bluecoats date mice! :laugh:

Edited by Commander Law

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Nice work on your first comic. The iPhone takes pretty good pictures.

Based on the speech bubble, it appears that the bluecoat is the rat's girlfriend. Even funnier. :laugh:

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The iPhone takes pretty good pictures.

How did you know I took the pictures with my iphone?

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Nice comic, although I can see in the 5th panel that those islanders got a little too "slaphappy" and knocked out a redcoat and a flag too. Either that or that redcoat was sleeping on the job and dropped the flag (what more can be expected out of you guys?).

Edited by Grimmbeard

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The images are a bit grainy and the 3rd one is not focused, but it's a decent comic anyway. I like the skeleton joke - Happens all the time :laugh:

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I have to agree that the tenderizing process is the most funny part.

Well done, it looks very good for a first comic.

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I believe you forgot the bit where you cut off the reproductive organs on the blues

Even with a magnifying glass they would be very hard to see!

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typically of the redcoats manners, you let the islanders made all the work!

I have to ask... what happen to your troop on the 5th panel?

The images are a bit grainy (...)

besides any side you are.... or the pirates you have to fight... I think we have a common enemy.... the camera!, so, let's not focus on that!

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I have to ask... what happen to your troop on the 5th pane

It's just supposed to have just the islanders in it. The flag in the background, I did not even realize it was there until I had already posted my entry.

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It's just supposed to have just the islanders in it. The flag in the background, I did not even realize it was there until I had already posted my entry.

:laugh: details.... details! :laugh:

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How did you know I took the pictures with my iphone?

Redcoats know everything. Actually it is in the EXIF info of the image files.

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Redcoats know everything. Actually it is in the EXIF info of the image files.

Which bluecoat would have thought of that?! Now who called our ropemaker stupid?

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Great work! Now I need to construct more barrels to store these extra treasures! :wub:

Edited by Purpearljellyblob

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Nicely done, I wonder who those gods are, they must be colorblind :tongue: .

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