Bane Posted October 8, 2010 (edited) Hey guys, I'm proud to present you a comic that I've made for a review on imperiumdersteine.de. That comic is full with nonsense stuff and in-jokes - a little bit of Paris Hilton, Dr. Horrible, Apple & stuff- but see for yourself. Here we go: If you want to see the original: Link Thanks for watching. Greetz Bane Edited March 22, 2011 by nine-eleven Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Buckshot Posted October 8, 2010 Ha! "Is the rescue approaching in underpants"---best part! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bane Posted October 15, 2010 I hope I have not given myself the trouble to translate that epic comic to gather only a single response. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Raygun Posted October 15, 2010 I hope I have not given myself the trouble to translate that epic comic to gather only a single response. Yea, feedback is scarce over here :) In short, I like the way you've created a story around an existing set, the presentation is slick, I like the way the panels "interact". Picture quality is top notch, with a good use of the camera's focus. However, I might have used some other fonts, some that would do more justice to the comic. Also, some word order /phrases were a bit off, but it's ok for a translation anyhow. Overall, the script was funny, is an over-the-top kind of way, sort of like my comic :P I didn't expect the running gag (when the girl goes up the stairs, what was a surprise. And about the "walkie-talky battery plot hole".. you gave yourself away :p I wouldn't have noticed :) More so, I thought that Bane was with the Federal forces! Feel free to comment about my comic, here: http://www.eurobricks.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=46986 This being said, well, make some more :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted October 17, 2010 Well, it made absolutely no sense, but I liked it. It was an interesting story idea, and I think it was put together quite well. The effects and editing were great, and the panels were easy to read. I;d like to see more comics from you. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Yellow Brick Posted October 17, 2010 I found this very funny, Great pictures and a Great story line I can't wait to see another. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites