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The Legonater

Conflict At Africa: Chapter 1

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Here's the first chapter...

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*Cue Dramatic music*

Commenst are more than welcome.

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Nice comic! :classic: I really like the movie reference. :laugh:

Great job. :thumbup:

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General Redwater

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Here's Part 2 to Chapter 1...

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Aren't Sergents the best confidence builders :tongue: ?

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Looks good so far. :thumbup:

One suggestion would be to add sound effects, like when things go...err boom (need better word here). You know like in comics. :classic:

The humour you add is quite good.

Well done! :sweet:

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Here's the final part of the first chapter.

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This one was a bit of a prelim- I put in a few new stuff that I haven't done in the previous entrys- namely the sound effects, whizzing bullets and Glendon's holsters- I'd really like to know what you think of them, and if I should continue with them. Chapter 2 coming soon...

Edited by The Legonater

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Wow you send out more comics then I could count which for good for me I always enjoy good comics is this is one of the best so far.

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