NewRight Posted October 18, 2009 (edited) Greedy Imperial POLITICIANS! Excellent work on this entry. The chandelier parts usage is nice although it does seem a little bare. Maybe adding addional candles would help and changing your candles to use something along the lines of this in white for each candle stick and some of these for the wicks as if they are burning in yellow or black if they are not. The imperial who is accepting bribes office looks nice and I love the use of all the flags, pictures, etc. It certainly isn't a boring office. Fun concept. Edited October 18, 2009 by NewRight Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Commander Laquiet Posted October 19, 2009 Very good so far! I like the whole entry, from the office itself to the nice use of the plant leaves as some sort of ivy. Great work. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
martinsuper Posted October 19, 2009 Made a new, more detailed version, what do you all think this round? MUCH MUCH MUCH better! This is a night and day difference. I almost feel that the first MOC has nothing to do with this one. This MOC really captures the scene, the guy in the attic makes sense, and the walls and building look very nice! I LOVE this improved version you made! I think you really put yourself in the running with this update! Very good job and taking the comments and making them happen! -martinsuper Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
badboytje88 Posted October 20, 2009 I like that you replaced the boy scared of the rat for the imperial officer eves dropping on the guys downstears. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Admiral Ron Posted October 20, 2009 Made a new version with upstairs furniture! I hope you enjoy! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MetroiD Posted October 20, 2009 (edited) The roof decoration is a nice idea, but I'm not sure I like that thing. Sorry, but I must admit it doesn't really look like a phoenix to me. You could perhaps try something simpler/ smaller? As to the furnishings on the second floor - the small table is a simple yet nice solution, it works just fine for me. However, due to the angles at which those pics were taken, I can't really make out what that red thing behind the eavesdropping soldier is. Looks like a sofa, but I'm not really sure... I noticed the new exterior shot - I strongly suggest moving those inverted slope bricks one brick up, so that they come just below the roof, like trusses. The way they're placed right now simply doesn't make sense. And if this is going to be your final version, I strongly suggest retaking some of those pics. As I'd mentioned, the angle makes it impossible to actually see what the red thing on the second floor is, so you could include a pic without the soldier there, if you really want to show the details you've included. Do make sure though that your first pic depicts your MOC in its entirety, from the top of the roof deco element to the bottom of the base; and take it at the angle at which your previous improvements were shown - with the soldier on the second floor looking at the camera. To me, that really was the best angle for this MOC. Oh, and you should also consider making sure those candles are aligned - you could bend them all slightly or have them all stand horizontally, but the way just one of them is bent inward right now just does not look nice... P.S.: Yay, knighthood finally gained!!! Poll posting, here I come!!! Edited October 20, 2009 by TheOtters Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Admiral Ron Posted October 21, 2009 (edited) This wont be my last, it shall be better within the week. the reason it is really hard to see the chair in the back (yes it is a chair) because that area is rather small, but i will try to make it better! EDIT: I remade it, you can even see the chair! enjoy! Edited October 23, 2009 by Admiral Ron Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Admiral Ron Posted October 24, 2009 I made a new one, and thanks again to everyone who helped make this the best that it can be! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
