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Eskallon

Battles Of Time-Comic

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Hi everyone

It has been a while since the last one but here it is so enjoy and please comment as last time no-one decided to comment. It can be good or bad. I would rather have one person say it was bad than you say nothing therefore I can improve the next comic. Anyway here:

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Hope you liked it!

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Well since you've asked for feedback, good or bad, here it is!

Good!

I love the scene setting overhead town idea! Very cool.

The sets are good enough to carry the scene and the photography for the most part is good.

Bad!

Spelling and punctuation. Many lines I had to read several times to be clear what was going on. The last line in particular; you missed the "t" in "the" and "t" in hunt. Bad keyboard?

Overall it's quite interesting!

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