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Enough: Part 10

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Last time: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8, Part 9.

Part 10: Why don't you hang around?

Last time, the park group stayed the night at a building inhabited by a seemingly crazy man. These guys are the luckiest, aren't they:

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3037098283_8981bbd7da_o.jpg"Thats the captain!"

3037936404_41b415e23e_o.jpg Hayes: "Hey!"

3037099281_b0d4af8dbe_o.jpg "Ohhh its early."

3037098487_fdf6ba9482_o.jpg"Glad to see you made it." "You too."

3037934260_00e2a46146_o.jpg Hayes: "So why's this door open?"

3037934742_7c95214dd4_o.jpg"Whoah." "Hey guys! Get down here."

3037934996_a605aaa200_o.jpg "Where's that shirtless guy?"

3037099453_963a39bbcd_o.jpg "Goddammit."

3037097959_7011cd0aa0_o.jpg"My bike!"

3037934140_94ed66dcc3_o.jpg "The weirdo took the bike."

3037935164_8dfa93a2be_o.jpg "If you insist on takin the truck, Nick's comin with me. You can have Sang."

3037934526_5fdb752d6d_o.jpg"Ok. What about the other guy?"

3037934794_f97240e5d2_o.jpg "Ahhh, he's only got a bat. He can come with me."

3037935774_5530c088d0_o.jpg "Nick, you're with me. Sang, you're with them."

3037098761_b35a930a57_o.jpg "Hey... man. You're goin with the others through the train." "Just a minute."

3037935248_9d7eaf752c_o.jpg"Right, wheres the level crossing?"

3037935984_7d80deee5f_o.jpg"How long is this guy gonna take? He's only got a bat." "I'll check on him."

3037935430_e33d2cde69_o.jpg "Hey! Oh..."

3037935644_fa4186bec9_o.jpg "He's gone."

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Jack charges the back door of the carriage:

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But fails:

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And finds an easier way:

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Notes!:

1. Now, I can finally say, the next part won't be for ages. Seriously.

2. I'm posting at this time on a Monday, because I have a day off.

3. I hope some people are happy with the drop in the numbers. I really didn't plan this. When I thought of the loner taking the bike and leaving the wire, my mind went to a weird place. Thank God i'm back :pir_laugh2:

4. The quick posting of these parts is only because of my day off. I have exams soon, and will be offline a lot more.

Thanks for looking.

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Very nice and even a little sinister... cool! :tongue:

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Very nice and even a little sinister... cool! :tongue:

Thanks Asuka (again :pir-blush: ). Yes, I like how this part seemed a little weird compared to the others, or as you said: Sinister.

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the guy committed suicide just because someone stole his bike ? ^^

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I really really don't wanna sound snippy here. I'm just giving you an answer:

He is alone. He has a fridge, a bat, 2 dumbells (weights) and a bike. Some shirtless guy was given shelter for the night by him, and in return Mr. Loner takes the bike. Thats gotta be hard to deal with. The bike was his only form of entertainment, and escape if he was ever surrounded.

I was also trying to cut down on the numbers as people had suggested. Like i've said, its dramatic, not actiony. I know I didn't say much about the new guy, but i'm showing how fickle people can be in times of crisis. (i've learned a bit in English class these few months :pir-blush: ) Hope that helps.

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:pir_bawling: That poor bat-guy!!!

I never-ever trusted the shirtless guy :pir_mad:

Great chapter, and full of surprises, hopefuly it will be enough to sustain me till the next issuse.

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I like it too. I now just want an attack.

The suicide was unexpected though, but I liked it.

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I never-ever trusted the shirtless guy :pir_mad:

Reminds me of Family Guy, when Peter is watching the chick flick in the cinema, and says: "I've got bad feelings about suicidy (a character) " Thanks

I like it too. I now just want an attack.

The suicide was unexpected though, but I liked it.

Oh you'll have to wait for an attack. And if you liked it, please, get help :pir-tongue:

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Another great comic Skinny Boy! :pir-classic: I like the hanging, which was unexpected, and how the shirtless guy ran away. What a wuss! :pir-tongue:

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Thanks Lego12. Just thought I'd say, 'Enough' has been published! Member z_zadar, has published it on this site! To view it in English, you'll need to click the english flag at the top of the page. Only Parts 1,2 and 3 are up so far, but I'm so excited. Thanks very much z_zadar :pir-cry_happy:

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