Clonecommando007 Posted October 5, 2008 (edited) Greetings Eurobricks Star Wars Fans! I've finished my first installment of the 222nd Legion Chronicles. This particular episode focuses on a squad in the 54th Infantry Regiment of the 222nd Legion. The first episode is called 'Arrival on Helioscaunt'. I'll get started... Like it? Not? I don't have any action in this one really, I just wanted to rather experiment and get into the series. If you are really getting into the series and want to know more about Helioscaunt, click here to read the topic about the planet. Please reply and post your comments and constructive criticism! Edited October 5, 2008 by Clonecommando007 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lego12 Posted October 5, 2008 That's a good comic! I can't wait to see more! I like how you made the clouds....its a really good idea... Lego12 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Skipper 24 Posted October 5, 2008 The clouds looked really good when the dwarf spider droid was emerging. Good work can't wait to see new instalments. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zorro Posted October 5, 2008 Looks very good, but your texts can be barely read on my laptop (which has a small screen) Your "comic" is neat, man ! I await the next episodes of them. Another from me. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
THE-FORCE Posted October 5, 2008 (edited) Very good, keep going ! BUT... why does Plo Koon have his lightsaber out IN the Republic Gunship and in an ally city when there are no enemies? Greets, The-Force! PS: I like the name, Helioscaunt! Edited October 5, 2008 by THE-FORCE Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Clonecommando007 Posted October 5, 2008 Very good, keep going !BUT... why does Plo Koon have his lightsaber out IN the Republic Gunship and in an ally city when there are no enemies? Greets, The-Force! PS: I like the name, Helioscaunt! In the gunship - That was an error on my part. But the city wasn't an allied city, it was neutral and was being taken over by the CIS, so it was assumed that they controled the city already. They exited the gunship not knowing the situation. I got the name Helio Scaunt from Helio, which means sun, and Scaunt, which means City. So it is essentially Sun-city. It is rather ironic if you think about it, because although the surface is very bright and sunny (the planet was named before all the tunnels were dug) the majority of the population lives in the artificial caverns lit only by the glow of the ever-present Helio Crystals. Of course the Helio Crystals were named thus because they glowed brightly, like the sun, and because it had relation to the planet's name. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dio Posted October 6, 2008 this is cool, keep it up =) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
darkrebellion Posted October 6, 2008 (edited) Great start for a comic Clonecommando007 . I really like the pics and the story. It is cool to see how the clouds (Which are great, congrats ) gives the story an atmosphere of mistery . Edited October 6, 2008 by darkrebellion Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Skinny Boy Posted October 6, 2008 Really great comic. I hope you end up having two clones talkin later, and one says: Then it came out of the fog... That would make my day. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pr0visorak Posted October 7, 2008 I like the fog effect!That was quite creative! Good comic! Hoping to see more soon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Clonecommando007 Posted October 11, 2008 (edited) Thanks for all the comments on this one. The next comic is up in a new topic! Edited October 11, 2008 by Clonecommando007 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tim Bit Posted October 11, 2008 Thats a great comic the next installment was even better I think. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
