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Prolog

{Space, an unimportant and nameless planet looms in the background against a myriad of distant stars, all beckoning to each other in small blinks of vibrant color. The sleek silhouette of the Eclipses streaks past, then the orange blaze of twin nozzles tandem with the infamous scream of the raging ion engines, flanked by twin blue-lit hyperdrives....}

Jax to Vhrils: Natasha, I am just learning of a major Assignation attempt on the Mor Daegger life... I have sliced the Republic Intelligence web, and this goes straight to the top... The Shadow Legion has even been tapped to provide backup... What is going on?

Vhrils: Palin, it's to dangerous back there... And even if we make it in time, whats the value of any one shadowy drug dealer... He is hardly worth even your notice....

Jax: Natasha, you know he doesn't just peddle smack; he also traffics info... he's one of my best...

Vhrils: I don't like this, not one bit.... Butcher is aptly named, you know... he doesn't have your patients... To think that he replaced you in the Shadow Legion... makes my skin crawl.

Jax:(A smile cracks beneath his covered brow. With his thick Jango like accent) I love your soul, Natasha.... but that side of you that drew you to me almost drove you into His arms... I would say this life in obscurity is well worth even just one hour of your love... But I must return.... we will monitor events from a distant view... Engage the cloaking device, and mark hyperspace as soon as coordinates are set....

(Shrouded in obscurity, the Sentinel Eclipse enters hyperspace unnoticed.)

{Time 3:41 Atop a nearby building, remaining cloaked, Jax and Vhrils monitor the situation transpiring adjacent to them a few buildings over. Through the sights on his BlasTech DC-19 "Stealth" carbine; Jax' steady trigger finger linked by proxy to his unwavering eye, watches events unfold, and will assist Daeggar should the need arise. A hovering transport comes into view, and opens fire}

Vhrils:(shrill voice) Palin? whats going on?

Jax: Quite women... I am not sure... Spin up the engines... Were gonna have to... help Butcher. Daeggars dead, looks like... Hard copy that transports manifest, licenses, and registry... Looks like something far more sinister is at work here.... (Via helmet mic) Shadow Corps... this is CC-23.... This is the Commander... Assist Butcher.... Units 1 and 4, cover the transport, 2, 3, 5, and 6, on that transport and on me... Stat...

Trooper 3: Who is this...

Trooper 1: Stand down brother... that is none other that the infamous legend, Palin Jax!

Edited by Palin Jax

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IS it okay if I post my char in my first 'story post'?

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I think it's ok if you introduce your character in your first story-post. Nice to have you in the story! :thumbup:

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Meanwhile, at the edge of the deserted industrial section of Coruscant, starship designer Oky Wan Kenobi was minding his own business. It was his day off, so he decided to continue working on his personal starfighter. It's a ship Oky Wan was building to test a new design of Jedi starfighter he was working on, the Jedi Interceptor. He buit it out of the wreckage of a Koro-2 Exodrive airspeeder that he found in a junkyard. The guy at the junkyard said that it was found in front of the Outlander Club a few years ago.

Oky Wan was constantly changing the design and, therefore, was always on a quest for the newest starship parts. He had received an offer from a trader called Moda Annix the other day. So, Oky Wan told him to meet him by the deserted industrial section at 3:30 that day.

Oky Wan arrived in his ship at the meeting place exactly on time, and so did Annix. He parked his starfighter and walked toward the trader, already inspecting the goods that were put on display. They seemed to be in a good shape and Oky Wan had a good feeling about this.

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Annix greeted him friendly and started talking about the parts.

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About ten minutes later, their deal was almost sealed, when suddenly they heard intense blaster fires coming from the deserted industrial section!

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At first, they believed the shots were directed at them, but quickly they realized that their was some kind of battle going on on the roof tops of the buildings nearby. Being the good-hearted souls they were, they decided to go in and see if somebody needed their help. Oky Wan rushed to his ship to get his blaster, while Moda took out the cortosis sword that he always carried with him.

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Once they were armed, they hurried toward the noise.

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Little did they know what kind of trouble they were getting themselves into...

When I saw that nobody was posting any actual comics, I was a little disappointed, so I decided to begin with it! :grin: No offense, though, you guys have some pretty mad writing skills! :oh:

So, what do you think? I am pretty proud of that ship! :wub: I think, it looks awesome! The background is nothing special really, just something I threw together to make a nice little scene. :wink: Can you spot the recycled part of my Block-Block entry? :laugh: The fence was inspired by those gates in the LSW video games that keep you from entering secret sections! :sweet:

Anyway, I hope that we will now be seeing more comics as this is supposed to be a comic game. :wink:

Also, I am looking forward to a cool battle scene with drug dealers and clones! :sweet: If somebody wants to use me in their scene and doesn't have this Batman gun, you can use a drill instead. :wink:

Comic Game ON! :thumbup:

Edited by Oky Wan Kenobi

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you guys are doing an excellent job so far!

{rapid gunshots are zooming past Butcher's ear as he hides behind an old electricity box. He knows that there is more going on than what has been seen before. He risks a peek from the side of the box once the chaingun was overheated. Daeggar is dead, and the buyer was getting away. The gun shoots again, and Butcher ducks behind the box.}

Butcher to Jax: Jax! Do you copy!?! I need backup! Drop the chopper and the snipers, ill go after the drugs!

{Butcher runs out from behind the box and jumps to a neighboring rooftop in the direction of the buyer. Sniper bullets nearly kill him, so he jumps down into an alley, continuing his pursuit.

(pics up soon)

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A republic cruiser sped through space, before coming to an abrupt halt. Inside his cabin lieutenant MacK slept soundly, before being woken by the static of a small intercom mounted on the cabin wall, followed by the deep raspy voice of another Republic officer. “Sorry to interrupt you sir, but we’ve come into contact with a small unidentified freighter. It had a small group of droid escort fighters around it, but is not responding to any of our communications to us”. MacK looked at the intercom for a moment before responding “and you need me to lead a boarding party, or something?” “That was the idea sir we need to see if the crew is okay, and what the freighter is doing here in the first place. This area of space is strictly forbidding to civilian space craft.”. “Roger that I’ll be down to the main hanger shortly.” MacK responded before slipping out of bed.

He stumbled over to the small closet in which his armor lay. Silently he dawned the Clone Trooper armor, while he mentally prepped himself for anything that could happen. The worst of which could be that the ship had been taken over by the confederate droids with the crew and cargo possibly being held hostage. After clipping on his grenade/supply belt the Lieutenant grabbed his helmet and blaster rifle, before going through the metallic door, then down the faceless hallways towards the hanger, and any hell that awaited the boarding party on that foreign ship.

Also sorry for taken so long to post I got side tracked with a small MOC I was building and a few other things :blush: .

Edited by MacK

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(Secured comms)

Jax to CT-1021: Crazy Ivan... Now!

CT-1021: Got it Sir! What bout Butcher?

Jax: He means nothing... He shouldn't have gotten himself involved with this. Way to over his head... But He does have gusto, I'll give em that. Give me a status as to were those blast are coming from.

CT-1023: Sir, we can't confirm, but looks like we got a sniper somewhere to the south of our position, and the transport, obviously not a class standard, has deployed Drodika's... Whom ever is involved, looks like they have got the blessing of Dooku and his ilk.

Jax: Good status report! Hit the Destroyers with a pulse EMP, I'll work the snipper... And get on Butcher, I can't stand a grown man crying...

CT-998 and CT-1001: Got it, Sir!

(open coms)

Jax to Butcher: The situation is too hot Butcher. I recommend you extract. This ain't no place for an easy bust. You got a snipper pinning you down..(Blaster bolt fires) He shouldn't be a problem. What I can see here, you got about 6 droidika's up their providing the rest of the fireworks... It's about to get quite up there, so take cover...

{Large yet confined EMP blast cascades across the rooftop, blackening out the electrical grids for a few city blocks, but neutralizing the Droidek's... As the transport also gets a whiff of the wave, it crashes down atop the tower... the clones quickly surround the perimeter}

(If I post picks, it will be quite more an exception than the rule... If this is a problem, let me know. My moc styles are craft... my imagination in story telling is quite more expanded...)

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Location: Somewhere in a bunker on Hoth

Easy 501-1: ''Why do we allways got the most boring jobs?!''

Soldier: ''I don't know...''

Intercom: ''Code red! Code red! Enemy fighters incoming!''

Soldier: ''Do you still think it's boring here, sir?''

I'm working on the action pics now, but school is keeping me busy...Danmit

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{Butcher lands heavily on he ground with a thud between two buildings and lisrens to Jax's message.}

Butcher to Jax: Jax, I can handle this. But Ill need some help. {running} (starts to pant) i got this guy on the run. ill try to chase him, he probably has a getaway transport somewhere close by. Leave the henchmen to your squad, and try to land a tracking device on the ship. Then straight to our ships. Just make sure we dont kill him, i want to question him. There is more going on here...

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Jax to Vhrils:(over shoulder) Man, what an ameture... had the tracker on that scow before this went down... Oh well, what he doesn't know can't humble him...

Vhrils:(girl like giggle, then serious) Palin, you know better... You left the command of your own volition, and I doubt seriously that Admiral Durge will have given up his hunt that easily... Better calm down the situation...

Jax: Woman, that is why I am so into you! (to Butcher via mic) Jim, it been real, but it ain't been real... dig... I cant-co, you know what I mean... But Razors a sharp edge, he'll cut to the chase much better then I... You know I can't go back anywho... So heres the scoop. I've got a tracer on our little friend their... Republic Intelligence ain't got much dirt on her, so I am thinking her registries been wiped clean; she is who she says she ain't. A bribes a bribe, and a scribes a scribe... I'll tracker her myself... but I will need to get the message back to you over more, uncivilized channels...

{Jim, Jax' is trying to stay an enigma at the moment, hence the jive speak lest anyone other than us may be eavse-dropping... he's being tracked by some unsavory characters that want those stolen plans restored... so I am going to just follow our friend... BTW, Razor is the current clone lieutenant in charge of the pod assigned to your mission. The rest of you... get into this... It will be the only way to keep it going. Don't be afraid to post without pics... There is no set storyline anyway, so be imaginative...}

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Jax, i jumped and ran because i am going to meet Vaders son and Oky Wan. But next time, just go along with it, ok? :classic: so you are going to chase down the buyer? ill just wait until vaders son posts.

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Oki Wan and Moda followed the narrow tunnel they had found hidden behind a large spider web, very cautiously, weapons ready.

Up and up the dark tunnel went and both of them were very relieved when they finally saw the end of the tunnel without any unpleasant incident.

Finally outside the tunnel, they saw that they were high above the ground of the old industrial sector, and the sound of blasterfire was now way louder then at the other side of the building complex they had passed through the tunnel.

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However, when they looked down they could not see anybody and so the two of them deliberated on what to do.

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They seemed to have ended in a deadlock, but Oki Wan discovered a possible way they could go.

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Teamwork was needed, and Oki Wan, supported by the Force, lifted Moda easily up so he could reach the edge of the level above.

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As soon as he was securely up Moda helped Oki Wan to climb after him.

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They walked on the only way they found, always peeking to the front and around every corner they encountered, not really taking into account little holes in the wall.

Suddenly, a mechanic sounding voice said: 'Freeze!' and Oki Wan and Moda heard the intimidating sound of guns that are unlocked.

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'Put down your weapons and turn around slowly!', the voice said and the two of them were eager to follow the order.

As soon as they saw their potential enemies to be clones, they quickly identified themselves and the clones asked them to come down to their sniper outpost.

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Moda was already down the ladder and asked one of the clones what was going on, when Oki Wan suddenly saw some smugglers coming in from behind the clones, ready to attack!

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There were three of them, and they had their weapons out already, the clones and Moda Annix appeared to be doomed!

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But Oki Wan reacted fast, shot down two of them in seconds while Moda cut of the remaining smugglers weapon hand with his sword, preventing the smuggler to shoot the clone standing beside him in surprise.

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The bodies and the prisoner were taken away buy some other clones for disposal and interrogation, and the clones showed Oki Wan and Moda the way to the main force, which could be entered through a small hole in the wall that lead down a narrow corridor...

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After they had already run for several hundred meters, suddenly a busy looking guy came out of a side-corridor and all three almost fell over one another.

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Oki Wan, sensing that this guy was on their side, quickly introduced Moda Annix and himself and explained where they were going. The other guy told them his name was Jim Butcher and he could need some help for his pursuing of a criminal.

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Oki Wan and Moda agreed to help him and followed Jim Butcher into another corridor, the criminal had taken on his escape...

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I have to apologize that it took me so long, I wanted to post some 12 hours ago. But I didn't make it tonight because I had some technical problems and needed some pictures from Oki Wan. The last three and certainly way better pictures are from Oki Wan, thanks for that! Some of my pictures are really bad, I tried my best but I just didn't get them better. I'm not too deep into photographing, sorry. Benny

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Oky wan and vaders son, if you have the new naboo N1 fighter, its the pilots torso and nailgun. if not, an indy bad guy torso is fine, like the one oky used. he also has indy's legs, with the holster. he has a regular smile face, with a brown or dark red police hat, but black is ok too. and here are some pics of the encounter:

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:oh: i actually did it!! thank you so much for the help, Oky Wan!

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chaingunner on hover vehicle

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the one on the building is jax, and the one on the ground is one of his troops

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Daeggar is dead

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Edited by JimButcher

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While running to the control room, Easy 501-1 and the soldier, they heard the intercom said; ''Dropships landed! Dropships landed!'' ''Danmitt,'' Easy 501-1 said ''Soldier, go to the trenches, I'm going to the control room, NOW!'' ''Yes, sir!''....

When he arrived there, he saw the dropships on the holograms...He didn't expected an invasion army this large..

''They were expecting us....'' He said ''How many troops we got here?''

''500 sir.'' a soldier said.

''They are at least with 1000 troops.....Whe need to call back-up....''

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please say its not to late to join!

sorry, the deadline has already passed. but you can join next chapter! and i have to say its been really quiet here lately...

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I have to say its been really quiet here lately.

Well, let's get this thing rolling again then! :grin:

Here is the next breath-taking entry in the epic first chapter of this amazing game!

As they ran, Jim Butcher explained Moda Annix and Oky Wan Kenobi that he had been pursuing the buyer from an illegal drug deal, but that one of his best men had taken over that mission a minute ago. With the apparent back-up from the seperatists, this druglord had killed the seller and opened fire on Butcher and his team. Now, he told them, it was his job to solve the mystery of who was behind all this and why this buyer was being supported by the CIS.

Jim: "... so if we want to investigate this, we need to get out of here!"

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But when they reached the end of the alley they were going through, they ended up at a dead end: The alley opened into a small courtyard where a bunch of Shock Troopers were fighting the snipers who were previously shooting at Butcher and who now had joined forces on one of the roof tops! If the trio wanted to walk out of this industrial section, they would need to somehow pass by this battle!

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Moda: "Well, looks like we're not going anywhere with this battle going on in the middle of the only way outta here! Any suggestions?"

Oky Wan: "I have an idea! My ship is parked right outside this industrial section! I could call my astromech and command him to fly it in here so that we can escape in it!"

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Excitedly, Oky Wan took out his intercom and activated it.

Oky Wan: "R4, do you copy. R4! R4, do you read me? Hello?"

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But there was no confirmative whistling coming out of the intercom.

Oky Wan: "Damn! That EMP from before must have effected my astromech as well as the battle droids! I fear we are stuck here!"

Moda: "So much for that idea. What now?"

Oky Wan thought intensively. There it was, his chance to show the Republic his support, and there was nothing he could do!

Or was there? As he looked around for a solution to their problem, he noticed a couple of fuel tanks in front of the building the snipers stood on...

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Oky Wan: "Guys, I have another idea! Jim, tell the clones to aim for the fuel tanks below the drug dealers!"

Butcher did as Oky Wan had recommended him, and the clones followed his command, concentrating all their fire on the fuel tanks.

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KA-BOOM!!!

There was a big explosion that disintegrated about half of the building's wall, resulting in its complete collapse!

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The battle was over! Jim, Moda, Oky Wan, and the clones came out of their hiding spots. After they approached the wreckage of the house and reasured themselves that the situation was safe, Butcher ordered the Shock Troopers to "clean up the mess" and see if the drug dealers were still alive and in condition to be questioned.

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They were just about to leave, when suddenly the hover transport with the gunner appeared around a corner and opened fire on the them...

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Well, I hope that will get things going again! :sweet: So, JimButcher and Vaders_son, we are being shot at, so you need to react quickly or we're all going to die! *oh2*

As for the other players, come on! Get into the action, too, or this game might end up getting cancelled! :cry_sad: But most importantly, have fun! That's what this game is about! :wink:

BTW, if you should not have a Harry Potter head for my character, you can use the Doctor's head from the new city line instead!

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The Republic drop ship sped through space, towards the small frigate that had come up on radar only half an hour ago. MacK sat slowly checking his gun for any faults, he jolted as the pilot calmly said “The Frigate is coming into view now-

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- our recon has destroyed the small fighter escort that was acompying the vessel. It was made up entirely of droid fighters, its likely droids have taking the ship, and it may get real messy down there". "Roger that pilot, get tactical troopers!", the lieutenant called out. Instantly all around the cabin clone troopers started to load their weapons put scopes on, click off the safeties. "We're going to land in 60 seconds get ready", the pilot called out again. The gunship made a noticeable decent MacK made a final check to his rifle then made sure his COM link was on the right channel. "5 4 3 2 give em' hell", was shouted out by the pilot as the side doors swiveled open, allowing for the clone troopers to pile out into the ghostly ship.

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When the last trooper got out the gunship, it pulled back towards the safety of the distant Republic cruiser from where it came. "Sergeant are you reading any movement?" MacK said into his COM link as he scanned the hanger for any movement, "sir I'm reading movement all over the place".

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"Ahhh!" Butcher cried. "Take cover!" He turned around quickly as the chain gun started to warm up and fire. He grabbed his two comrades and shoved them behind the wall, and dived for safety himself. Alas, he was not fast enough, and a bullet clipped his lower leg, just above the ankle. The wound wasnt fatal, but it still hurt like blazes.

"Not again", he groaned as he clutched his bleeding leg. He was pinned down again.

"I need some explosives!" he yelled as he seached the area for them. None were in sight, but he had another idea. He glanced at the speeder bike not too far from their hiding place. All of the clones assisting them were laying dead on the ground. Quickly, once the chain gun overheated and stopped firing, Butcher limped out, grabbed a fallen soilder's helmet, and shot the fuel tank of the speeder open with his nail gun. Luckily it didnt explode. Gasoline started pouring out, so Butcher let some of it go into the helmet, and hopped back behind the wall. He then told Oky, "Im gonna need to borrow your gun for a second". He took the blaster, opened it's chamber, and took the battery out. He put it in the helmet, then unexpectedly threw it at the hover vehicle when the chaingun fired again. Butcher aimed his gun at the inside of the helmet as it jouneyed nearer to the fighter and fired. The long nail hit the battery dead center. There was a big explosion as the helmet shattered and the hovercar blew up into the air.

"Ahhh!" Butcher cried. "Take cover!" He turned around quickly as the chain gun started to warm up and fire. He grabbed his two comrades and shoved them behind the wall, and dived for safety himself. Alas, he was not fast enough, and a bullet clipped his lower leg, just above the ankle. The wound wasnt fatal, but it still hurt like blazes.

"Not again", he groaned as he clutched his bleeding leg. He was pinned down again.

"I need some explosives!" he yelled as he seached the area for them. None were in sight, but he had another idea. He glanced at the speeder bike not too far from their hiding place. All of the clones assisting them were laying dead on the ground. Quickly, once the chain gun overheated and stopped firing, Butcher limped out, grabbed a fallen soilder's helmet, and shot the fuel tank of the speeder open with his nail gun. Luckily it didnt explode. Gasoline started pouring out, so Butcher let some of it go into the helmet, and hopped back behind the wall. He then told Oky, "Im gonna need to borrow your gun for a second". He took the blaster, opened it's chamber, and took the battery out. He put it in the helmet, then unexpectedly threw it at the hover vehicle when the chaingun fired again. Butcher aimed his gun at the inside of the helmet as it jouneyed nearer to the fighter and fired. The long nail hit the battery dead center. There was a big explosion as the helmet shattered and the hovercar blew up into the air.

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when does a new chapter start?

when this one ends. if your looking for a specific date, no ones sure. im probably guessing after me, palin, oky, and moda are leaving coruscant in pursuit of the villan(s), and when mack meets us or something. And wouwie, im a little unsure of your character and his part in the story. Is he a "bad guy"? And Hoth might not be a good location for you right now. But dont let me boss you around, do what you wish. :wink:

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MacK's grip tightened around the grip of his blaster rifle and looked around scanning for the slightest hint of CIS troops, but all he noticed where a few blaster score marks on the wall where a small fight between the ships crew and battle droids may have taken place.

"This is second squad we've reached the portside hanger there were a few battle droids, but nothing big. We are currently progressing to the main cargo hold, over and out".

"BOOM!" "Vulture droid in sights take cover!", Several clone troopers fired their rifles at a walking vulture droid as it started to advance on their position.

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MacK sprinted to the safety of a few crates, where a few others had taken refuge, firing his rifle as he went. "The sergeants down, where’s our heavy trooper? We need to take that thing down!" MacK shouted. As he said that a lone trooper bearing a PLX-1 portable missile launcher emerged from behind a crate.

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As soon as the missile was locked on the vulture droid, he pressed the trigger, and watched as the missile a blue flash whizzed towards the droid before exploding destroying the droid. There was no time for celebrating however since a squad of battle droids had emerged from behind the ruble.

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"Screw it, we don't have time for this", said the lieutenant as he pulled a thermal detonator from his belt.

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"Down in front!". A nearby clone trooper watched as MacK flicked the grenade over a random canister into the midst of the battle droids.

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"Grenade", "roger roger", calmly remarked a few battle droids, before the grenade exploded sending droid bits flying.

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Even before the smoke cleared the remaining clone troopers were heading towards the doorway which the battle droids had used to enter the hanger.

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"This is second squad, over. We've made it to the cargo hold there’s a number of CIS assault vehicles including AATs and small personal carriers". "I read you second squad, set some explosives then get to call for your evact, my squad will look around a bit before pulling out, incase there are any prisoners, and such" MacK said into COM link. After an long pause came a clone troopers voice on the other end, "Affirmative sir we'll do as you wish".

BTW I'm sorry for the picture quality my cameras not that good indoors :sceptic: .

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:cry_sad:Many apologies for my lateness. I have been busy with schoolwork and haven't had much time to be on the computer. I will enter the story as the commander of a unit of shock troopers. Once again, my apologies.

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:cry_sad:Many apologies for my lateness. I have been busy with schoolwork and haven't had much time to be on the computer. I will enter the story as the commander of a unit of shock troopers. Once again, my apologies.

Hey, its alright, we all have the real world to attend to first! i was just begining to worry that you wouldnt post... now, wheres Vader's son?

Edited by JimButcher

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Edit by Hinckley: Palin Jax, please resize the picture. It's over 3000 x 2000 pixels and takes up a lot of bandwidth. That pretty annoying for members browsing on a slower connection. There's a handy picture resizing tutorial here. We prefer pics to be 800 x 600 or smaller. Thanks. :classic:

{The silence of space is briefly disturbed by 3 sets of twin ion engines... Two TIE SHARDS flank the Sentinel Eclipse, as she departs known space into the unknown darkness of the black. Pushed to their limits... the SHARD's break formation}

SHARD alpha 1: Sir, thats it... we gotta go back. But we will be waiting for you...

Eclipse(Jax): Thanks again brothers... When we find what we are looking for, we let you know. Keep an ear out though... I think something far more sinister is afoot than just a smack bust gone sour. Something says it's got allot to do with the Jedi, and there nemesis... the long neglected legacy of the Sith.

Shard alpha 2: Sir, sure we can't talk you outa this... we really need you back there...

Jax: I promise, when the Galaxy really needs me, I'll be back... But it's really to hot for me here now... I've got to find them... It's the Force thats causing all this you know... (rambles)

Vhrils: Forgive him, boys, he's getting worse all the time. He has gained far to much knowledge then any clone should... It's the Force... He has to find the lost Masters, before it kills him.

{Eclipse lights up her 2 powerful hyper drives, and is enveloped into hyperspace}

Edited by Hinckley

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